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Moisés
Phones The last weekend I went to the theatre with my mother. At first one voice told us one advice: "remember switch your phone off". I put my phone in airplane mode and my mother put her phone in silent. His phone went off in the middle to the theater and began to vibrate. My mother dial all the buttons and put the hands free. She spoke up. My mother told her friend that she couldn't speak now. Finally hung up the phone. What a shame!! The next time we won't carry the phones.
14 Thg 04 2020 13:26
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<s>The l </s>Last weekend I went to the theatre with my mother.
<s>At first one voice told us one advice: "remember switch your phone off".</s> Before the play started, they advised/reminded us to switch off our phones. /Before the play started, we were advised to switch off our phones.
I put my phone <s>in</s> on airplane mode and my mother put hers <s>phone in</s> on silent.
<s>His</s> <s>Her</s><s style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"> phone went off</s> Someone called her in the middle of <s style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">to</s> the play <s style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">theater</s> and her phone began to vibrate. My mother pressed the speaker button and spoke loudly, telling her friend that she couldn't speak at that moment. <s style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">dial all the buttons and put the hands free. She spoke up. My mother told her friend that she couldn't speak now.</s>
Finally she hung up<s> the phone</s>.
<s>What a shame!! </s> How embarrassing!
<s>The n</s>Next time we won't take our phones to the theatre <s>carry the phones. </s>

Hi Moises, well done, it's a nice story. Good job using Past Simple and also the future tense.
Remember, with "last+weekend/week/year/summer/month etc" we don't use the article "the".
Also, what a shame= qué lástima, how embarrassing=qué vergüenza.

Hope this helps!

14 tháng 4 năm 2020
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