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Happy Lantern Festival Today is the Happy Lantern Festival ,In the evening they hang out thousands of colorful lanterns for people to enjoy.and we usually eat sweet dumplings named glutinous rice balls .they are made of various kinds of filling .for example :red bean,black sesame and fruits .Black sesame is my favorite filling .There are also activities like the dragon dance, lion dance and setting off fireworks - it's very lively (BTW, I will go to watch fireworks display in the evening) Now ,I am going to say "Happy Lantern Festival " to my friends Wish all friends can enjoy a wonderful night !O(∩_∩)O~
6 Thg 02 2012 06:47
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Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Happy Lantern Festival. In the evening they hang out thousands of colorful lanterns for people to enjoy.and We usually eat sweet dumplings named glutinous rice balls. They are made of various kinds of filling. For example :red bean,black sesame and fruits. Black sesame is my favorite filling .There are also activities like the dragon dance, lion dance and setting off fireworks - it's very lively (BTW, I will go to watch fireworks display in the evening)

Now ,I am going to say "Happy Lantern Festival " to my friends

Wish all friends can enjoy a wonderful night !O(∩_∩)O~

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7 tháng 2 năm 2012

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Happy Lantern Festival. In the evening they hang out thousands of colorful lanterns for people to enjoy and we usually eat sweet dumplings named called glutinous rice balls. They are made of various kinds of fillings. For example, red bean, black sesame and fruits are a few. Black sesame is my favorite filling. There are also activities like the dragon dance, lion dance and setting off fireworks - it's very lively (BTW, I will go to watch fireworks display in the evening)

Now, I am going to say "Happy Lantern Festival " to my friends.

Wish all friends can enjoy a wonderful night !O(∩_∩)O~

28 tháng 3 năm 2013

Happy Lantern Festival

Today is the Happy Lantern Festival, in the evening they hang out thousands of colourful lanterns for people to enjoy. We usually eat sweet dumplings named glutinous rice balls. They are made of various kinds of filling, for example: red bean, black sesame and fruits. Black sesame is my favorite filling. There are also activities like the dragon dance, lion dance and setting off fireworks - it's very lively (BTW, I will go to watch fireworks display in the evening)

Now, I am going to say "Happy Lantern Festival" to my friends

Wish all friends can enjoy a wonderful night !O(∩_∩)O~

7 tháng 9 năm 2012
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