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Dog Walking Good morning. I am Shinoda Toshio. Call me “Toshi”. I am living in northern Tokyo in Japan. It is still hot in Japan in mid-September. My inhabitable area is near the crossing of two big rivers. There is much grass around the riverbank. I am taking the dog for a walk around the riverbank the early morning of a holiday. When I see many green scenes, I feel fresh feeling. The dog will feel fresh too. After a walk finishes, a dog dozes relaxedly for a while in the cool room. It seems that the secret of long life is here.
15 Thg 09 2012 23:27
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Dog Walking

Good morning.
I am Shinoda Toshio. Call me “Toshi”.
I live in north Tokyo in Japan.
It is still hot in Japan in mid-September.
My neighborhood area is near the crossing of two big rivers.
There is much grass around the riverbank.
I am taking the dog for a walk around the riverbank in the early morning of a holiday.
When I see many green scenes, I feel fresh feeling.
The dog will feel fresh too.
After the walk is finished, the dog dozes relaxedly for a while in the cool room.
It seems that here is the secret of long life .

16 tháng 9 năm 2012
Beautiful picture.I like this dog
22 tháng 5 năm 2013

Dog Walking

Good morning.
I am Shinoda Toshio. Call me “Toshi”.
I am living in northern Tokyo in Japan.
It is still hot in Japan in mid-September.
My inhabitable area is near the crossing of two big rivers.
There is much grass around the riverbank.
I am taking the dog for a walk around the riverbank the early morning of a holiday.
When I see many green scenes, I have a fresh feeling.
The dog will feel fresh too.
After a walk finishes, a dog dozes relaxedly for a while in the cool room.
It seems that the secret of long life is here.

16 tháng 9 năm 2012
Beautiful picture, Toshi, and a beautiful dog! What is his or her name?
16 tháng 9 năm 2012

Dog Walking

Good morning.
I am Shinoda Toshio. Call me “Toshi”.
I am living in northern Tokyo in Japan.

I live in north Tokyo in Japan.
It is still hot in Japan in mid-September.
My inhabitable area is near the crossing of two big rivers.

The area where I live  or  My neighborhood
There is much grass around the riverbank.
I am taking the dog for a walk around the riverbank in the early morning on of a holiday.
When I see many green scenes, I feel fresh feeling.

Maybe:  When I see green scenery, I have a fresh feeling.

However, I think there is a better word than "fresh".  Perhaps you mean, "young, youthful, brand-new, reborn, or refreshed"?
The dog will feel fresh too.
After a walk finishes, a dog dozes relaxedly for a while in the cool room.

After the walk is finished, the dog dozes relaxedly in the cool room.
It seems that the secret of long life is here.

Not bad: but better:  It seems that here is the secret to a long life.

16 tháng 9 năm 2012
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