Hello there all you people again

I traveled the pass weekend,       I flew back to my house and I saw something interesting in the airplane.

I traveled this passed weedend. While I flew back to my house I saw something interesting on the airplane

There was a couple of girls that were traveling with their parents, it appears to me that the mother was a American and the father was a Mexican guy.

There  were a couple of girls that were traveling with their parents. I appeared to me that the mother was an Americcan and the father was a Mexican guy. 

I could hear that this girls with an age of about twelve could speak english and spanish perfectly. 

I could hear that these girls who were about twelve  could speak English and Spanish perfectly.

After that I thought... I would be nice to be able to learn English and Spanish at that young      , but unfortunately my parents are both Mexican 

After that I thought... It would be nice to be able to learn English and Spanish at that young age, but unfortunately my parents are both Mexican 

so I    writing this entry inorder to improve my English :)

so I am writing this entry in order to improve my Enlish :)

Hello there all you people again

I traveled this past weekend; I flew back to my house and I saw something interesting in the airplane.

There were a couple of girls that were traveling with their parents and it appeared to me that the mother was an American and the father was a Mexican guy, and I could hear that the girls, with an age about twelve who were about twelve years old, could speak english and spanish perfectly.

After that I thought... it would be nice to be able to learn English and Spanish at that young, but unfortunately my parents are both Mexican so I am writing this entry in order to improve my English :)

Notes:

-use "were" for plural (more than one) and "was" for singular (one). For example: there were a couple of girls and there was a boy

-use "a" before nouns that begin with consonants. Use "an" before nouns that begin with vowels. For example, an American and a Meixan 

Bye for now :)

Hello there- all people again

I traveled this past weekend, I flew back to my house and I saw something interesting in the airplane.
There was a couple of girls that were traveling with their parents. It appears to me that the mother was a American and the father was a Mexican guy, and I could ear that this girls with an age about twelve could speak english and spanish perfectly.
After that I thought... It would be nice to be able to learn English and Spanish at that young, but unfortunately my parents are both Mexican so I writing this entry in order to improve my English :)