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I had a terrible day I had a terrible day 'coz I was caught shopping in Taobao while at work , I was so concentrated that I failed to notice my boss was standing right behind me, my colleague who's in the next stall tried to warn me by kicking my leg but I was too stupid to realise that,what's worse, I told him to quit kicking me, then he looked like his face got run over by a tractor at the time..soon my boss tapped me on the shoulder and asked me to have a word with him in private to be honest ,that scared me half to death, fortunately he wasnt as mad I as I thought he would be, what a day...
24 Thg 05 2013 12:39
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I had a terrible day

I had a terrible day because 'coz (coz is for chatting, not suitable for writing ^^) I was caught shopping in Taobao while at work. I was so concentrated that I failed to notice my boss was standing right behind me. My colleague who's in the next stall tried to warn me by kicking my leg but I was too stupid to realise that. What's worse, I told him to quit kicking me. Then he looked like his face got run over by a tractor at the time..soon my boss tapped me on the shoulder and asked me to have a word with him in private. To be honest, that scared me half to death. Fortunately he wasn't as mad I as I thought he would be. What a day...

 

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24 tháng 5 năm 2013
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