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Do You Like Gays ?
It is hard to say our attitude is like or not like. Maybe you think homosexuality violates God’s thought, or maybe you think homosexuality is dirty, but I believe everyone have rights to get happiness, no matter they are gay, lesbian or straight. In China, many gays have chosen to marry with a woman. They have a lot of reasons, like wanting a child, or not wanting others to talk about them. However, they are still unhappy and their wives are unhappy,too. Finally though, their wives know, eventually. However, in China, we haven‘t so many rules about gays and gay marriage, so the lawyers don't know what to do.
There are good people and bad people in world, and there are good people and bad people in the homosexual world. I wish our government could make rules, and I believe God does not hate you because you are a homosexual. God loves you because you love life and you help others, because you study hard and you are achieve your dream.
[Good work. I made the sentences plural because your sentence started the subject in the plural, so that the rest of them would also have to be plural. Remember to leave a space after all periods and commas. As for you opinion, the point may not be whether people like gays, but if they are ready to accept them without condemnation.]
actually,i want say our government should make rules,after all ,many things need laws~
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