Hello Madam.  I am Huangxin.  I can also be called "CC".  I am 24 and come from Yulin, Guangxi province.  Last year, I was a floor attendant at the FengLin International Hotel.  During that year, my duties included cleaning rooms, supplying incidentals, checking on furniture and equipment.  My primary role was to get to know our guests and provide excellent service, one where they can feel at home.

If you are an american interviewer, this is my introduction.  how do you think about that? [what do you think?]

Hi , mandan, I'm HuangXin. You can call me CC. I'm 24. I come from Yulin GuangXI province. Last year, I was a floor attendant in FengLin International Hotel. I worked there for one year, and my duties are were: cleaning rooms, supplying consumer goods and checking the furnitures and equipments, then [as well as] getting to know the customers and providing warm [friendly] service to them, to let them feel that this the hotel is very nice. [to help them feel comfortable in the hotel.]

I need to say it out loud, naturally. and natively, Should I add something?

Thanks for your help.╮(╯3╰)╭