Who am i ?
My name is María Fernanda, i'm I'm mexicanMexican. i'm I am from Hidalgo, a state which are is locatead near of Mexico City. I am 22 years old. I finished completed my major (industrial engineering) in November, so i I am looking for a good Job job. I' ve been studing studying english English for 1 year but i think i I need to have some conversations with english English speakers. I'll be grateful if someone corrects this post :)
Who am i I?
My name is María Fernanda, i'm I'm Mexican, i'm I'm from Hidalgo, a state which are is locatead near of Mexico City. I am 22 years old. I finished my major (industrial engineering) in November, so I am looking for a good Job . I've been studing studying English for 1 year but I think I need to have conversations with English speakers. I'll be grateful if someone corrects this post :)
In English the personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized.
English uses capitals for the proper nouns of places and things (such as the name of a country or language) as well as people.
For having studied English for only one year, you made very few mistakes. Keep up the good work.
<em>Edited for grammar, organization, and word-flow. </em>
My name is María Fernanda. I am <em>a twenty-two year-old Mexican woman</em> from Hidalgo; a state <em>located</em> near Mexico City. I <em>completed</em> my <em>Industrial Engineering</em> <em>degree</em><em> </em>last November <em>and</em> I am <em>seeking employment in that field. I have </em>been <em>studying English</em> for <em>a</em> year <em>and now I am ready</em> to have conversations with <em>native</em> <em>English</em> speakers. <em>I will</em> be grateful if someone corrects this post.