Mahsa
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tourists and I I always like to see foreigner people but in Iran usually we see tourists lower.These days I do not out a lot because I am busy for learning English.But I reminded a few years ago when I were out of bookstore and I were watching books. My mind was to books and heard a strange vocabularies near me and without nothing saw her, I told her what do you say? (With Persian language) And then I saw them those were near me, they are there people. A man about 60 years old, a woman about 55 years old and a boy about 30 years old.They are blue eyes and European face. I told them with emotion, where are you from? They told me Netherlands. I told them " wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome”. They were smiling but I did not know to tell them because my English were not well. So I told them bye and they told me we like Iranian people and said bye. Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.
20 Thg 08 2014 03:52
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tourists and I

I always like to see foreigner people,  but in Iran usually we see tourists are lower in number  these days.
 
I do not out go out a lot because I am busy  for    learning English.

But  was   I  reminded a few years ago when I   were out of   was at a   book store and I were

looking  
at books. My mind was to  on looking at  books and  but heard a strange vocabularies near

me and without nothing saw her, thinking    I   told her what do you    asked her what did you say?   (With Persian language)

And then I saw them those were near me, there were other people near me they are there people.

A man about 60 years old, a woman about 55 years old , and a boy  younger man about 30 years old.

They had   are   blue eyes and European face appearance ,  I asked   told   them with excited

emotion, where are you from? They told me the Netherlands. I said      told them " wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome here ,  They were smiling , but I did not know how to tell them because my English was  were not very good ,  well.

So I said   told them        goodbye and told them    they told me we like Iranian  people from the

netherlands ,   and said



then waved my hand , bye 




Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.

20 tháng 8 năm 2014

tourists and I

I always like to see foreign people, but in Iran we dont see many tourists.These days I do not go out a lot because I am busy for learning English, but I reminded a few years ago when I was out at bookstore and I was looking at books. My mind was on the books and I heard a strange vocabulary near me. I saw her, and told her "What did you say?" (In Persian) And then I saw them near me. There was a man who was about 60 years old, a woman of about 55 and a younger man who was about 30 years old.They had blue eyes and European faces. I told them with emotion, "Where are you from?" They responded "The Netherlands". I told them "Wow, your flowers are famous, you are welcome here”. They were smiling but I did not know to tell them because my English was not very good. So I told them bye and they told me that they like Iranian people and said "bye".
Please correct my mistakes. Thank you so much.

20 tháng 8 năm 2014
Nice try. Keep writing and practicing.
20 tháng 8 năm 2014
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