Love story

I like the theme song from ", <Love Story">, very much. I tried to translate the this famous song into Chinese. Maybe Perhaps there are some mistakes of in my translation. correct Can you please correct my Chinese mistakes if I had minterpreted them wrongly.  Thank you （only Chinese）, my italki friends. Thank you! The way you wrote is like a command, very rude.

Where do I begin
to tell the story of how great a love can be
the sweet love story that is older than the sea
the simple truth about the love she brings to me
Where do I start.
我该从哪里开始讲述
那段伟大的爱情故事
这段甜蜜的爱情故事比大海还要古舊老
她带给我的爱是那样的简单而真实
我该从哪里开始诉说

With her first hello   她的首次的招呼
She gave a meaning to this empty world of mine 就把我空虚的世界变成有意義了
There'd never be another love another time以後再沒有這样的愛了
She came into my life and made the living fine
She fills my heart  她充滿了我心 占据大強
She fills my heart with very special things 她以超凡的東西而充滿我心
with angel songs 天使的歌曲中的
with wild imaginings 新鮮幻想  這裡的 "wild" 不是疯狂的意思而是不能控製的新感
She fills my soul with so much love 以這么多的憐惜充滿我的灵魂
That anywhere I go
I'm never lonely.
With her along who could be lonely 有了她的陪伴, 還会寂寞嗎?
I reach for her hand我想把她的手拉着
It's always there 不怕不会在
带着她的第一声问候
她好像把我的世界掏空
从此我不再拥有自己的情爱和时空
她走进了我的生活，让生活变得如此美好
她占据了我的心房
她是如此的与众不同占据着我的心房
她用天使般的歌声
她用疯狂的幻想
她用火热的爱情占据着我的灵魂
不管我走到哪里
我永远不会感到孤独
有她的陪伴谁还会感到孤独
我牵着她的手
我们永不分离
 
How long does it last
can love be measured by the hours in a day
I have no answers now but this much I can say:
I know I'll need her till the stars all burn away
and she'll be there
需要经过多长时间的磨难 愛情能有幾時存
爱情能够用每天厮守在一起的时间来衡量吗 可把日常的時刻来衡量嗎
我自己现在也没有答案但我又必须说出来 現在我雖不知答案, 只有這一番衷語,
我知道我需要她一直等到所有的星星都逐渐消失 我只知當星星的大限已到, 我才不再依重她
她就在那里等着我 而她仍然在那兒

You understood the first paragraph very well.  The next few ones, the meaning is quite different from the original...

Love story

I like the song, <Love story>, very much. I tried to translate the famous song into Chinese. Maybe there are some mistakes of my translation, correct my mistakes（only Chinese）, my italki friends. Thank you!

Where do I begin
to tell the story of how great a love can be
the sweet love story that is older than the sea
the simple truth about the love she brings to me
Where do I start.
我该从哪里开始讲述
那段伟大的爱情故事
这段甜蜜的爱情故事比大海还要古老
她带给我的爱是那样的简单而真实
我该从哪里开始诉说

With her first hello
She gave a meaning to this empty world of mine
There'd never be another love another time
She came into my life and made the living fine
She fills my heart
She fills my heart with very special things
with angel songs
with wild imaginings
She fills my soul with so much love
That anywhere I go
I'm never lonely.
With her along who could be lonely
I reach for her hand
It's always there
带着她用第一声问候
她好像把我的世界掏空 将我空洞的世界赋予意义
从此我不再拥有自己的不会再有别的情爱和时空
她走进了我的生活，让生活变得如此美好
她占据了我的心房
她是如此的与众不同占据着我的心房
她用天使般的歌声
她用疯狂的幻想
她用火热的爱情占据着我的灵魂
不管我走到哪里
我永远不会感到孤独
有她的陪伴谁还会感到孤独
我牵着她的手
我们永不分离
 
How long does it last
can love be measured by the hours in a day
I have no answers now but this much I can say:
I know I'll need her till the stars all burn away
and she'll be there
需要经过多长时间的磨难 爱能持续多久
爱情能够否用每天厮守在一起的时间来衡量吗
我自己现在也没有答案 但我又必须说出来 至少我可以说：
我知道我需要她 一直等到直到所有的星星都逐渐消失 消逝
她就都会在那里等

有些意思不大对，不过翻译的很棒，很浪漫，几乎可以作原创了。