my first essay

Hello everyone! My name is Alice Wang.Nice to meet you! I love traveling and making friends.
The most thing I want to do is to travel around as  many as places to experience various culture and make friends with people from different country to broaden my vision.

My first essay.

Hello everyone! My name is Alice Wang. Nice to meet you! I love to make friends and travel.
The most important thing I want to do is to travel around many places, to experience various cultures, and to make friends with people from different countries in order to broaden my views.

Great well done.