Sven
Deciding on a title I'm writing a paper on how to promote health in the workplace and I have some trouble with the title and wondered if a native English speaker could take a look. Here is the title I've come up with: Promoting Health at Work through PERMA. Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This title just doesn't feel right, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it.
30 Thg 10 2014 11:06
Bài chữa · 4
1

I also think it sounds fine as you wrote it.  A few other options:

Promoting a Healthy Workplace Through PERMA

Promoting a Healthy Workplace With PERMA

Promoting Wellness at Work Through PERMA.

30 tháng 10 năm 2014

Deciding on a title

I'm writing a paper on how to promote health in the workplace and I have some trouble with the title and wondered if a native English speaker could take a look. Here is the title I've come up with:

Promoting Health at Work through PERMA.

Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This title just doesn't feel right, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it.

 

===

Hi, I'm adjusting my message so it's clearer. The spacing was lost in the previous verson.

Margaret Smith From United States Languages: English, Spanish
Learning: Spanish

 Hello, I think your title is fine as it is. If you want to make it a little shorter, you can just keep the key words and drop "at" and "through". A few suggestions are below: Promoting Healthy Work Settings......PERMA: Promoting Health at Work...... Health and Work- PERMA Approach Also, try browsing Google Scholar for ideas. Good luck with your paper.

 

30 tháng 10 năm 2014
Hello, I think your title is fine as it is. If you want to make it a little shorter, you can just keep the key words and drop "at" and "through". A few suggestions are below: Promoting Healthy Work Settings PERMA: Promoting Health at Work Health and Work- PERMA Approach Also, try browsing Google Scholar for ideas. Good luck with your paper.
30 tháng 10 năm 2014
Bạn muốn tiến bộ xa hơn?
Hãy tham gia cộng đồng học tập này và thử nghiệm những bài tập miễn phí!