Anna
My dream vacation It’s a little to write about one destination because I want to visit so many countries where I have never been. I would go to travel to Italy, France, Australia, and Canada. I like Europe very much. I was in Czech Republic four times and with a big enjoying I visit it again. First, I decided to write about Australia. I choosed this destination because I think there no war. People are kind, calm and interesting. But, of course, its that’s not the only reason why I want to visit this country. There are many interesting people in other different countries, too. But I think that there are many very beautiful nature places but there no historical. So, I choosed Italy.
25 Thg 01 2015 18:46
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My dream vacation

It’s not enough to write about just one destination because I want to visit so many countries that I've never been to. I would go to travel to Italy, France, Australia, and Canada. I like Europe very much. I've been to the Czech Republic four times, and with a big enjoying enjoyed it so much that I'd happily visit it again. Originally, I had decided to write about Australia. I chose this destination because I think there's no war there. People are kind, calm and interesting. But, of course, its those aren't the only reasons why I want to visit this country. There are many interesting people in other different countries, too. Yet I think that there are many places with beautiful natural areas but very little history. So, I'd choose Italy.

 

 

14 tháng 2 năm 2015

My dream vacation

It is difficult to write about just one destination because I want to visit so many countries where I have never been. I would love/want to travel to Italy, France, Australia, and Canada. I like Europe very much. I have visited Czech Republic four times and look forward to visiting it again. First, I decided to write about Australia. I chose this destination because I think they have no war there. People in Austalia are kind, calm, and interesting. But, of course, its that’s not the only reason why I want to visit this country. There are many interesting people in other different countries, too. But I think that Australia has many very beautiful natural places, but there is limited history there. So, I choosed Italy over Australia.

 

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31 tháng 1 năm 2015

My dream vacation

It’s too little to write about one destination because I want to visit so many countries where I have never been. I would love/want to travel Italy, France, Australia and Canada. I like Europe very much. I have travelled Czech Republic four times and enjoyed it so much that I am visiting it again. First, I decided to write about Australia. I chose this destination because I think they have no war. People are kind, calm and interesting. But, of course, that’s not the only reason why I want to visit this country. There are many interesting people in other countries too. But I think that those countries have very beautiful natural places but not historical. So, I chose Italy.

 

I must tell you each and every country has a rich historical background no matter how big or small. Unless it's Antarctica! :P Wish you luck for your sojourn! :)

25 tháng 1 năm 2015
Paris - magic city :) It should be your first target :)
25 tháng 1 năm 2015
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