今天我注册了 italki.

今天我注册 了italki.
我学习汉语为期一个月。 （我学了一个月汉语）
随后我的老师回去他的故乡沈阳。 （我的老师回他的故乡沈阳了）* (了:Passed~)
我看电视剧以便学习汉语。 (我通过看电视剧学习汉语）
我要新老师。 （我想找一个新老师）~

What I meant to say was,
"Today, I joined italki.
I had studied Chinese for a month, then my teacher went back to her hometown, Shenyang.
I've been watching television series to study Chinese.
I need a new teacher.

Thanks a lot. =)
多谢。

今天我注册 italki.

今天我注册了 italki.
我学习了为期一个月的汉语。
随后（然后）我的老师回到了他的故乡，沈阳。
我看电视剧以便（为了）学习汉语。
我需要要新老师。

What I meant to say was,
"Today, I joined italki.
I had studied Chinese for a month, then my teacher went back to her hometown, Shenyang.
I've been watching television series to study Chinese.
I need a new teacher.

Thanks a lot. =)
多谢。

今天我注册了 italki.

今天我注册了 italki.
我学习汉语为期一个月了。
现在随后我的老师回去他的故乡沈阳了。
我通过看电视剧以便学习汉语。
我需要新老师。

What I meant to say was,
"Today, I joined italki.
I had studied Chinese for a month, then my teacher went back to her hometown, Shenyang.
I've been watching television series to study Chinese.
I need a new teacher.

Thanks a lot. =)
多谢。

yunji，welcome to italki, 加油！