Miss you

Do you understand the feeling of missing someone?it is just like that you will spend a long hard time to turn the ice-cold water you have drunk into tears.

Yes, that's right. I agree with you. "it's hard to correct things written with an artistic licence"

Miss you

Do you understand the feeling of missing someone? It feels like spending a long hard time turning the ice cold water you drunk into tears.

edit: it's hard to correct things written with an artistic licence