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Séverine
The Séverine name originates The Séverine name originates from the Latin name Severinus. History Severinus was the name of a Roman family. Séverine is the feminine form of Severin and his popularity was, as for the latter, discreet enough over the centuries. In France, it was nevertheless in vogue between 1970 and 1980. Séverine figured notably in the list of the most popular female names for three years. His rating has fallen sharply thereafter; Séverine is now much less popular but keeps a rather stable trend. Meaning of the name Séverine The name is derived from the Latin severus which means "strict" or "brave". Character The Séverine´s are usually serious and often put distance between themselves and others. In cold air, they actually seek to protect themselves. The Séverine´s are fearful nature and worried. They preserve and are not easily revealed. Introverted, they cultivate their secret garden they reserve access to certain privileged. Highly selective, friends are handpicked because Séverine still prefer to stay alone being badly accompanied. Full of common sense, they are also intuitive women who often adopt good judgment vis-à-vis the people and situations. These are insightful visionary we can manipulate or surprise. In community, Séverine are the leaders, those we follow and we take as models. Furthermore, they show dynamic and active. On impeccable discipline, their working life is, in their view, capital importance. Sometimes to the detriment of the rest. Séverine appreciate the organization and well done. They are horror of nonchalance and mediocrity.
18 Thg 06 2015 10:53
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The Origin of the name Séverine name originates

The Séverine name originates from the Latin name Severinus.

History
Severinus was the name of a Roman family. Séverine is the feminine form of Severin and his its [1] popularity was, as for the latter[2], discreet enough over the centuries. In France, it was nevertheless in vogue between 1970 and 1980. Séverine figured notably in the list of the most popular female names for three years. His Its [3] rating has fallen sharply thereafter; Séverine is now much less popular but keeps a rather stable trend.

Meaning of the name
Séverine: The name is derived from the Latin severus which means "strict" or "brave".

Character
The Séverine´s are usually serious and often put distance between themselves and others. In cold air {or cold weather}, they actually seek to protect themselves. The Séverine´s are fearful natured [4] and worried. They preserve [5] and are not easily revealed {or "do not easily reveal/open themselves"}. Introverted, they cultivate their secret garden (that) they reserve access to certain privileged people. Highly selective, friends are handpicked because Séverine still prefers to stay alone being badly accompanied and are poor company. Full of [6] common sense, they are also intuitive women who often adopt good judgment vis-à-vis {or "with respect to"} the people and situations. These are insightful visionaries [7] (who) we can manipulate or surprise. In [8] a community, Séverine are the leaders, those who we follow and who we take as models. Furthermore, they show are dynamic and active. On (the subject of) [9] impeccable discipline, their working life is, in their view, of capital importance -- sometimes to the detriment of the rest. Séverine appreciates the organization and a job well done [10]. They are horror of horrified by nonchalance and mediocrity.

 

Great job!

 

1.  Refers to family so "its".

2.  I think the idiom "by and large" reads a little clearer than "as for the latter" in this sentence, but it's preference.

3. Refers to the name, so "its".

4. Or "are fearful in nature".

5. Or "hold things in", "are guarded"

6. Another creative idiom that can be used here: "brimming with"

7. "These" is plural, so "visionaries". Or "She is an insightful visionary".

8. "In" is okayfor everyday informal grammar, but the preposition should be "within".

9. Added "the subject of" more for clarity and flow of sentence. It's not incorrect as-is. Another variation is "With respect to".

10. "A job well done" is more of an idiomatic phrase, so it also applies to other things that don't have anything to do with an occupation/job.

18 tháng 6 năm 2015

The Séverine name originates

The Séverine name originates from the Latin name Severinus.

History
Severinus was the name of a Roman family. Séverine is the feminine form of Severin and his its popularity was, as for the latter, discreet enough over the centuries. In France, it was nevertheless in vogue between 1970 and 1980. Séverine figured notably on the list of the most popular female names for three years. His Its rating has fallen sharply thereafter; Séverine is now much less popular but keeps a rather stable trend.

Meaning of the name
Séverine The name is derived from the Latin severus which means "strict" or "brave".

Character
The Séverines are usually serious and often put distance between themselves and others. In cold air, they actually seek to protect themselves. The Séverines are fearful in nature and worried. They preserve are guarded and are not easily revealed. Introverted, they cultivate their secret garden, to which they reserve access to certain privileged people (an idiom you could use here is "a privileged few"). Highly selective, friends are handpicked because Séverines still prefer to stay alone rather than being badly accompanied. Full of common sense, they are also intuitive women who often adopt good judgment vis-à-vis the people and situations. These are insightful and visionary; we can manipulate or surprise. In community, Séverines are the leaders, those we follow and we take as models. Furthermore, they show are dynamic and active. On They have impeccable discipline because their working life is, in their view, of capital importance. Sometimes to the detriment of the rest. Séverines appreciate the organization and a job well done. They are horrified by of nonchalance and mediocrity.

 

This was enjoyable to read! :)

25 tháng 6 năm 2015
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