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Colombian engineer civil Jessica Paola Florez was born in municipality Los Patios, on April 21nd, 1993. She has one brother and one sister, your father is dead and her mother not live with her. She lives with her grandparents for part of her mother, She started her school when she was 3 years old. She was graduated from high school in 2008 and in 2009 started her college career. She is very good drawing. She likes to sleep all day, she adopted two dogs at the college, they are very beautifull, She works at a college. since you graduated, she works in a laboratory of soils, she is single is very responsible is an excellent person. Currently is studying other career.
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