The person most important in my life is obviously my daughter, she is three years old and was born in Almeria. Although her father is from Galicia, she is very Andalusian. She has brown eyes and curly hair which are brown too, like her eyes. She is a likeable girl and always smiling. In general, she is my happiness. The role my daughter has in my life is everything, because I like doing everything with her. She and I are also often together because I´m looking after her every afternoon, as she usually goes to school in the morning. So, she and I are together in the afternoon. It´s unnecessary to say that she is a good girl. The reason why I have chosen her is clear, we aren´t special people. For everybody their children are the most important people in their lives. It´s very usual. 

An anecdote that I can say is, for example, when we are at home after lunch every day and I tell her, ‘Nieves, we are going to sleep for a few minutes’ and she said, ‘I´m not mummy, I´m not going to bother you, you sleep’. Then, I want give her a big kiss.

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Talk about an important person in your life. What role does this person have/play in your life? What are the reasons why you have chosen him/her? Tell an anecdote or talk about a memory you share with this person.

The person most important person in my life is obviously my daughter. She is three years old and was born in Almeria. Although her father is from Galicia, she is very Andalusian. She has brown eyes and curly hair, which is brown too, like her eyes. She is a likeable girl and always smiling. In general, she is my happiness. The role my daughter has in my life is all-encompassing, because I like doing everything with her. Also, she and I often are together because I´m looking after her every afternoon as she usually goes to school in the morning. So, she and I are together in the afternoon. It´s unnecessary say that she is a good girl. The reason why that I have chosen her is clear; we aren´t special people. For everybody their children are the most important in their lives. It´s very usual normal.
An anecdote that I can say tell is, for example, when we are at home after lunch every day and I tell her, ‘Nieves, we are going to sleep some minutes’ soon and she says, ‘I´m not mummy, I´m not going to bother you, you sleep you’. Then, I want to give her a big kiss.

Could you correct me, please?

Great job, and very sweet!