Where I live.

I live in a little and always warm town,. There is are a lot of blue birds, and they awakeme wake me up (or awaken me, but that is very formal) every morning with the sound of the rain pouring in on (or against) my ceiling, the virgin mountains without the harmful hand of the human being, always green in the background, my dear far blue town.

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-Jeff

Where I live.

I live in a little town and that is always warm. town, Tthere isare a lot of blue birds,. tThey awake me every morning along with the sound of the rain pouring inon my ceiling.  tThe virgin mountains without thethat have never been harmed by the hand of the a human being, tower always green in the background. My dear far blue town.

Very poetic.  I tried to keep the poetic feel in my corrections.

Where I live.

I live in a little town that isand always warm. town, Tthere are is a lot of bluebirds, they that awaken me every morning, along with the sound of the rain poring onin my roofceiling. The virgin (another word could be pristine) mountains without the harmful hand of the human beings are always green in the background, - my dear distantfar blue town.

Where I live.

I live in a little and always warm town, there are (plural of is) a lot of blue birds, they wake me up every morning with the sound of the rain poring in my ceiling, the virgin mountains without the harm hand of the human being, always green in the background, my dear far blue town.

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I live in a little town where it is always warm. There are a lot of blue birds that wake me up every  morning. Sometimes I wake up to the sound of rain pouring on my ceiling. There are also virgin mountain, undisturbed by human beings. My dear far blue town. 

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