# The medicine progress
In the twentieth century, science has succeeded great results for medicine . Researchers in genetics has got to cure more diseases than before were unthinkable. People with serious diseases have confidence than advances be able help them.
Furthermore, there are a couples that they can not have a son because of fertility problems. However, today thankful in vitro fecundation they can have a family.
Also, the genetic progress allow parents to choose how will be their son,because they be able choose the genetic of their son.
Apparently this is a great advance, but this also suppose moral problems. There is people that disagree with use of this methods.
In my opinion, is necessary to regulate these advances so all people will win wellness.
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# The medicine progress The progress of medicine
In the twentieth century, science has succeeded produced (1) great results for medicine. Researchers in genetics has have got to cured more diseases that before were unthinkable (2). People with serious diseases have confidence that advances will be able help them.Furthermore, there are a couples that they can not have a son because of fertility problems. However, today thankful due to in vitro fertilization fecundation they can have a family.
Also, the progress of genetics progress allows parents to choose how their son will be their son, because they be able choose the genetics genes of their son.
Apparently this is a great advance, but this also suppose causes (3) moral problems. There are is people that disagree with the use of these this methods.
In my opinion, it is necessary to regulate these advances so all people will win have (4) wellness.
(1) this verb translation is difficult. You could use multiple translations. Another might be "...science has succeeded in producing great results for medicine."
(2) Another translation, if you want to include a comparison "more" would be "Researchers in genetics have cured more disease than what was previously thought possible."
(3) This is another difficult verb translation. You could also use "produces".
(4) One more difficult verb translation. You could also say "...so all people can be well."
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