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Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas)
"Gaddafi Female Gorillas" is also called "Amazone Escort", they are all master soldier and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated from female military acodemy in Tripoli. They protects Gaddafi for twenty-four hours all weather personal protection. They guarded Gaddafi whenever Gaddafi went our.
On March 20, 2011. There were two group female gorillas members broke into the anti-government millitants headquarters 300 meters away by the civilian cars, sparking fierce clash with anti-government millitants.
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In this article "Gorillas" should probably be "guerrillas". It's the Spanish word for "war combatants" but in English means something like rebel "soldiers". Hope that helps.
29 tháng 3 năm 2011
Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas)
"Gaddafi Female Gorillas" are also called "Amazone Escort", and they are all master soldiers and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated from (a ~ the) female military acodemy in Tripoli. They protect<strike>s</strike> Gaddafi's <strike>for </strike>twenty-four hour<strike>s </strike>a day. <strike>in all weather personal protection.</strike> They guard<strike>ed</strike> Gaddafi whenever Gaddafi goes out.On March 20, 2011. There were two groups of female gorillas members who broke into the anti-government millitant's headquarters 300 meters away by using (with) civilian cars, sparking a fierce clash with anti-government millitants.
I always learn something interesting in your essays. Good writing here.
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.29 tháng 3 năm 2011
I especially like the heart shape on his right knee. ㅋㅋ
29 tháng 3 năm 2011
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