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Pleasee correct my letter,It is very important for me My name is Nataly. I am specialist POG Creation in Supply Chain Department in Ukraine. I connected to company as ASD Leader and have experience to work in all department in the store and also in support office. I finished my master’s program: management of projects and consulting. Although I graduate from university with honors, I continue to develop my skills any way as possible. In addition to participating in various economic competitions, I volunteer my time to organizations striving to implement social initiatives and studying by online platform. My main proud is my attended in Enactus club where I was vice-president in kneu team. We done innovation projects that can help people, like online studying platform for preparation to exams for children from the orphanage or social project for deaf people who were able to listen music and many things else. First of all I don’t want stuck on one place and want every day develop myself and try to making the environment near me better and more progressive. I think that company can develop only if it responds to changes in the world and the minds of people. In two weeks work I offer the idea how optimize the processing of check shelf life of goods and it is idea was implementing by me with support store manager. It allowed reducing the time spent on this employee and redirecting it to work with customer. Also in F&V where I was department manager starting UFO project in our country and we with team from French change not only appearance of department but also approach to business management. On all my positions be it only intern of department or DDM in the dairy bakery department or DM in F&V I try to bring something new and modernization approach or in ordering goods,presentstion of products or controlling stocks and shrinkage. And in my own experience I saw how even a little changes could simplify the work to help people in their daily tasks and increase performance. And I don’t want to dwell on the little things, as I see still much room for improvement! And I realy wont to do it! Take a look at the daily situation differently and find new decision to become work easier and more satisfy customers. For me it is innovation. I think now is period of emotional economy and the business innovatiom is finding such potential needs and wants of consumers, such we can satisfy and give additional benefit while others don’t even think about it. It is something more than only needs.

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Nataly, I checked and revised some more of your post.  I will do the last part as soon as I have more time.


I have also been the department manager in Fruits and Vegetables [1], where I started a UFO [?? 2] project in Ukraine, and together with a team from France, we changed not only the structure of the department, but also its approach to business management.

In all my positions, be it that of a department intern, or DDM [??3] in the dairy bakery department or Department Manager in Fruits and Vegetables, I attempted to modernize the company's approach to ordering goods, presentation of products, and control of stock and shrinkage.  In my own experience, I have seen how even a little changes can simplify the work, help employees in their daily tasks, and increase performance.

However, I do not wish to dwell on the little things, as I see that there is still much room for improvement.  And I really want to achieve it.

My belief is that it is important to take a look at the daily situation from all angles, and find new solutions to make the work both easier and more satisfying to customers. For me, this is innovation.

I believe that we have entered into a period of an emotional economy, and that by resorting to innovations in business, we can seek out the potential needs and wants of consumers.  Thus, we can provide additional benefits to consumers -- which is something that others don’t provide.  We can do something more than simply satisfying the consumer's needs.  [4]


[1]  Am I correct that F&V refers to Fruits and Vegetables?  I guessed this because you previously referred to shelf life.

[2]  Every English speaker will immediately interpret "UFO" as Unidentified Flying Objects [НЛО, неопознанные летающие объекты]!  Therefore, you should write out the complete name in words.

[3]  I don't know what "DDM" means here.  In English, "DDM" usually means Doctor of Dental Medicine.  You obviously mean something else.  I suggest you write out the complete words.

[4]  Please read the paragraph about the emotional economy very carefully to make sure whether I have captured your meaning.


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Nataly:  I worked on your letter until I had no more time.  I will come back tomorrow and continue.  Or perhaps someone else will come along and "pick up" (continue something that was begun earlier) where I "left off" (stopped).


Please correct my letter.  It is very important to me.

My name is Nataly. I am a specialist in the Supply Chain Department of POG Creation in Ukraine. [1]  I joined the company as the director of Adaptive Software Development, [2] and have experience working in all department of the business, as well as in office support.

I have completed a Master’s program in project management and consulting.  Although I graduated from university with honors, I continue to develop my skills in all ways possible. In addition to participating in various economic competitions, I volunteer my time to organizations striving to implement social initiatives and studying by online platform. [3]  I am especially proud of the fact that I was Vice-President of the Enactus Club at Kiev National Economic University. [4]   Among many other accomplishments, we undertook innovating projects which help people, such as the creation of an online study platform which prepared orphans to take exams, and a social project for the deaf, who were enabled to listen to music. 


It is of paramount importance to me that I don't mark time, but instead develop myself every day, and try to make my surrounding environment better and more progressive.  I think that a company can develop only if it responds to changes in the world and people's ideas. In only two weeks I offered an idea how to optimize the process of checking the shelf life of goods, and my idea was implemented by me with the support of the company manager.  It resulted in reducing the time spent by an employee on this task, allowing the employee to redirect his time to customers.

[1]  Is "POG Creation" the name of your company?

[2]  Sorry, I am not familiar with "ASD", and so I had to guess that it means Adaptive Software Development.  If I'm wrong, please tell me what ASD does mean.

[3]  I am not sure if YOU study on online platforms, or if the organizations you mentioned implement studying on online platforms.

[4]  It was difficult to understand what you were trying to say.  I hope I guessed correctly.


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Nataly, I tried my best, but some parts were not understandable.   Try writing the parts I didn't understand in Russian, and I will see if I am able to understand it more clearly.


In order to create products different from those of one's competitors, and which will satisfy customers' hidden desires [1] means making improvements in all steps of business, including production, creating a product image, logistics, sales, after-sales service, and many more details that are conducive to business. I want the exchange experiences with other countries. Working with people who have a different culture and mentality can yield unexpected results and new insights on problems. I think it is amazing, and I truly want to be a part of this.  After completing these programs I think first of all I will exchange this experience with my colleagues and my experience like team captain.  The presence of teacher education really can help me.  [2] And although my knowledge features people of head office and store that allow me to combine this people and create good team of innovation.[3] Because over power in people that support this business of all side. [4] To be a pioneer is a great responsibility, and I want to be a worthy representative of my country. And I am not afraid of difficulties; I only want to become a part of making changes.


[1]  I am very sorry, but it was very difficult to understand this phrase before the [1].  I had to guess at your meaning.

[2]  Sorry.  I don't understand why you mention "teacher education" at this point.

[3]  Sorry again.  I cannot understand this sentence.

[4]  I cannot understand this sentence either.  :(


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Creation different of another competitors through customers satisfaction hidden desires that means improvements in all steps of business that include a production, creating imidge of product, logistics, sales, after sales service, and many more details that make business. I want the change experience with another nation. Work with people that have different culture and mentalities could give unexpected result and new visions on problems. I think It is amazing and I really want to be a part of this. After completed this programs I think first of all I will exchange this experience with my college and my experience like team captain and the presence of teacher education really can help me. And although my knowledge features people of head office and store that allow me to combine this people and create good team of innovation. Because over power in people that support this business of all side. To be a pioneer It is a vety and responsible and I want to be a worthy representative of my country. And I don’t afraid difficulties I only want to become a part of changes.

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