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朋友的15个事实

1. She loves to dance.
她喜欢跳舞。
2. She likes to eat! She likes to eat a lot of snacks.
她<strike>喜欢吃饭</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">是个吃货</font>。她喜欢吃<strike>很多</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">各种</font>小吃。
3. She has one small dog. It's name is Oscar.
她有一<strike>只</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">条</font>小狗。<strike>他</strike>它的名字<strike>是</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">叫</font>OSCAR。
4. She has three childeren, three daughters. She loves them very much.
她有三个孩子，三个女儿。她<strike>非常喜欢</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">很爱</font>她们。
5. She likes to drink wine, but only on the weekends.
<strike>只在周末她喜欢喝葡萄酒.</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">她喜欢喝红酒，但只在周末的时候喝。</font>
6. She is married.
她结婚了。
7. She likes to draw.
她喜欢画画。
8. She likes to cook, but on Sunday she likes to eat leftovers.
她喜欢做饭.<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">但</font>星期天她喜欢吃<strike>余量</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">剩下的</font>。
9. She isn't afraid. She likes to travel alone.
她不<strike>是害怕</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">胆小，</font><strike>。她</strike>喜欢独自旅行.
10. Everyday she rides her bycicle to work.
<strike>每天</strike>她<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">每天</font>骑自行车去上班。
11. Her favourite TV show is 'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
她最喜欢的电视剧是：'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
12. She is a strong woman.
她是一个坚强的女人.
13. She likes to drink coffee.
她喜欢喝咖啡。
14. She likes to shop.
她喜欢买东西。
15. She is awesome!
她太棒了!

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朋友的15个事实

1. She loves to dance.
她喜欢跳舞。
2. She likes to eat! She likes to eat a lot of snacks.
她喜欢吃饭。她喜欢吃很多小吃。（吃饭usually means have a meal ,like dinner /lunch,i think 吃东西is better here)
3. She has one small dog. It's name is Oscar.
她有一只小狗。他它的名字是OSCAR。
4. She has three childeren, three daughters. She loves them very much.
她有三个孩子，三个都是女儿。她非常喜欢她们。
5. She likes to drink wine, but only on the weekends.
只在周末她喜欢喝葡萄酒. ，但是只在周末喝。
6. She is married.
她结婚了。
7. She likes to draw.
她喜欢画画。
8. She likes to cook, but on Sunday she likes to eat leftovers.
她喜欢做饭.星期天她喜欢吃余量剩饭。
9. She isn't afraid. She likes to travel alone.
她不是害怕。她喜欢独自旅行.
10. Everyday she rides her bycicle to work.
每天她骑自行车去上班。
11. Her favourite TV show is 'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
她最喜欢的电视剧是：'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
12. She is a strong woman.
她是一个坚强的女人.
13. She likes to drink coffee.
她喜欢喝咖啡。
14. She likes to shop.
她喜欢买东西。
15. She is awesome!
她太棒了!

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朋友的15个事实

1. She loves to dance.
她喜欢跳舞。
2. She likes to eat! She likes to eat a lot of snacks.
她喜欢吃饭。她喜欢吃很多小吃。
3. She has one small dog. It's name is Oscar.
她有一只小狗。他它的名字是OSCAR奥斯卡。
4. She has three childeren, three daughters. She loves them very much.
她有三个孩子，三个都是女儿。她非常喜欢她们。
5. She likes to drink wine, but only on the weekends.
只在周末她只在周末喜欢喝葡萄酒.
6. She is married.
她结婚了。
7. She likes to draw.
她喜欢画画。
8. She likes to cook, but on Sunday she likes to eat leftovers.
她喜欢做饭.星期天她喜欢吃余量剩饭。
9. She isn't afraid. She likes to travel alone.
她不是害怕。她喜欢独自旅行.
10. Everyday she rides her bycicle to work.
每天她每天骑自行车去上班。
11. Her favourite TV show is 'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
她最喜欢的电视剧是：'Goede tijden, Slechte tijden'.
12. She is a strong woman.
她是一个坚强的女人.
13. She likes to drink coffee.
她喜欢喝咖啡。
14. She likes to shop.
她喜欢买东西。
15. She is awesome!
她太棒了!