Battlebots Battlebots is an american television show which reminds me the enviroment of WWE, but instead of people fighting we have people controlling robots. This is a very nice show for people who e

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Battlebots Battlebots is an american television show which reminds me the enviroment of WWE, but instead of people fighting we have people controlling robots. This is a very nice show for people who enjoy computers and robots in general, in fact as silly as it may sound I remember watching this show back when I was in high school and it helped me to chose my course back then because I was so hyped that could build a robot like those from the show haha but I ended up changing my course after one year : D. This is a video of the show: http://www.sciencechannel.com/inscider/battlebots-episode-203-highlights/ And this is a video of competition that happened at my college(IESB): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KY6ftwI253Q

7 Thg 09 2017 01:40

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Battlebots

Battlebots is an American television show which reminds me the environment (You don't need "the environment" here. It sounds kind of odd.) of WWE, but instead of people fighting they (In my opinion, "they" is a better and more natural sounding pronoun here.) have people controlling robots. (What you wrote is grammatically correct; however a better way of wording this is "...but instead of people fighting, they have people battling one another with robots" since one can control a robot to do anything, not just fight/battle.) This is a very nice show for people who enjoy computers and robots in general, in fact, as silly as it may sound, I remember watching this show back when I was in high school and it helped me to (I think British English speakers would place a "to" here but we don't in American English. Actually it sounds odd to use "to" here in American English.) choose ("Chose" is the past tense.) my major in college later on (If you weren't talking about making a decision in college, then you could say ".. and it helped me choose my classes back then...") because it had motivated me to to try to build a robot like those from the show haha but I ended up changing my major a year later : D.

This is a video of the show: http://www.sciencechannel.com/inscider/battlebots-episode-203-highlights/
And this is a video of a competition that happened at my college(IESB): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KY6ftwI253Q

I used to watch this show some too. It's a great show. They have bot competitions like this every year at the fair in my area as well.

7 tháng 9 năm 2017

Battlebots

Battlebots is an American television show which reminds me of the environment of WWE, but instead of people fighting, we have people controlling the robots. This is a very nice show for people who enjoy computers and robots in general. In fact, as silly as it may sound, I remember watching this show (back) when I was in high school and it helped me to choose my course/major back then because I was so hyped I thought I could build a robot like those from the show haha. Nevertheless, I ended up changing my course after one year : D.

This is a video of the show: http://www.sciencechannel.com/inscider/battlebots-episode-203-highlights/
And this is a video of a competition that happened at my college(IESB): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KY6ftwI253Q

7 tháng 9 năm 2017

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