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Could you please correct my mistakes? Formal letter (CAE) Dear Madam, I am writing on behalf of my friend and former colleague Sarah Stanley, who has applied for a job of staff manager at English Language College. Sarah Stanley and I got acquainted more than ten years ago, as she held a managerial position at Heartbrook College where I worked as French teacher before transferring to your college. During the decade of our constant interaction, I, as a member of staff, have become aware of Ms. Stanley's exquisite professional qualities, including outstanding communicational skills, extreme sense of duty and utmost determination to secure an ideal working order in her department. Thanks to her immense sociability and unique self-control Ms. Stanley always managed to create a benevolent atmosphere among members of staff, despite all the tension and stress long working hours and tight deadlines used to put on us. Sarah Stanley enjoyed an enviable respect and appreciation at her previous workplace, however since the college suddenly went bankrupt three months ago, she has been in constant search of a new job relevant to her professional experience. I strongly believe that Ms. Stanley's skills and qualifications will be extremely beneficial for our college development as an international educational establishment and that it will be very difficult to find a better candidate for the position of staff manager. Please contact me for any additional information and details. Sincerely, Anna Kalinina
17 Thg 10 2018 08:27
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Dear Anna 

A very good letter! Please contact me if any of my corrections are unclear.

Kind regards, Carolina 


Could you please correct my mistakes? Formal letter (CAE)

Dear Madam,

I am writing on behalf of my friend and former colleague Sarah Stanley, who has applied for the job of Staff Manager at English Language College.

 I became acquainted with Sarah Stanley more than ten years ago, when she held a managerial position at Heartbrook College, where I worked as French teacher before transferring to your college. During the ten years of our interaction, I, as a member of staff, have became aware of Ms. Stanley's exquisite professional qualities, including outstanding communication skills, extreme exemplary sense of duty and utmost determination to secure an ideal working order in her department. Thanks to her sociable personality and unique self-control she always managed to create a pleasant atmosphere among members of staff, despite all the tension and stress, long working hours and being under tight deadlines used to put on us. Sarah Stanley enjoyed an enviable respect and appreciation at her previous workplace, however since the college suddenly went bankrupt three months ago, she has been in constant search of a new job relevant to her professional experience.

I strongly believe that Ms. Stanley's skills and qualifications will be extremely beneficial for our college development as an international educational establishment and that it would be very difficult to find a better candidate for the position of Staff Manager.

Please contact me for any additional information and details.

Sincerely,

Anna Kalinina
17 tháng 10 năm 2018
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