A poem-Scorpio's secrets

Scorpio's secrets

Everyone has the secrets they cannot speak
I am the Scorpio, with secrets

I look down at the girl
under the moonlight
I wonder who she is

sometimes, I think I know her
she sits beside the window
looks up at me

I am sure I am beautiful
though not bright as moonlight
the cloud covers up part of my body
just like
her wet eyes with sorrow

I tell her to cheer up
she seems to understand me
and said
"Hello, sorrow"



I want to say that everyone has secrets which can make us sad. We can't be deep in sorrow. Even the beautiful Scorpio is covered by clouds sometimes.
The girl in the poem was cheered up by Scorpio.
Why did I choose the Scorpio as the beacon? 1st, it is considered to be the most mysterious constellation. 2nd, my constellation is Scorpio. Haha~~~

It's mine, too :p

Someone's poetry is not so easy to edit, other than correcting spelling, because normal grammar rules do not necessarily apply and changing a phrase might also inadvertantly change the meaning.