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CAN SOMEONE CHECK THIS PLEASE! I always have had a passion for geosciences, that’s why when I finished high school I Choose to study Geosciences engineering.During my life in university I studied several disciplines that are part of geosciences. In my first year some of them were Calculus, Basic Geology and Basic Geophysics, being the last one of the subjects that I was especially interesting for. Therefore according to my next year in college, new subjects were introducing in my study program proportionally with an increasingly level of difficult. Is in this way, I studied Gravity method, magnetic method, quantum geophysics, Data processing, and electromagnetically method, which were my favorite subjects in college. As a geosciences student I also went to several conferences and entered in some Geology contests. I would appreciate if someone chan check the paragraph. :)

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CAN SOMEONE CHECK THIS PLEASE!

I always had a passion for Geosciences. So, when I finished high school I choose to study Geosciences engineering. During my life at university, I studied several parts of geosciences. In my first year, some of them were Calculus, Basic Geology, and Basic Geophysics. Basic Geophysics was the most interesting one for me. Therefore according to my next year in college, new subjects were introduced in my study program, with an increased level of difficulty. I studied the Gravity method, magnetic method, quantum geophysics, Data processing, and electromagnetically method, which were my favorite subjects in college. As a Geosciences student, I also went to several conferences and entered in some Geology contests.
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I have always have had a passion for geosciences, that’s why when I finished high school, I chose to study Geosciences Engineering.

During my life time in university I studied several geosciences disciplines that are part of geosciences. In my first year these included some of them were Calculus, Basic Geology and Basic Geophysics, the last one being one of the subjects that I am especially interested in.

Therefore According to my next year in college, new subjects were introduced in my study program proportionally with an increasingly level of difficulty. Is in In this way, I studied gravity method, magnetic method, quantum geophysics, data processing, and electromagnetic method, which were my favorite subjects in college. As a geosciences student, I also went to several conferences and entered in some geology contests.

I would appreciate if someone can check this paragraph. :)

Great job, please let me know if you have any questions about these changes :)

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Thank you wayne, I will divided.
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My degree? In Mexico,I graduated last year.
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Where do you study?

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