Thanks to you're interested in Korean.
감사합니다....관심을 가져주셔서..한국어에
(Your) pronunciation is very good too.
................발음(~도)......아주 좋네요...(발음)~도
If (you) keep try (to learn Korean), (you) will have good results!
~한다면.....계속 노력하다..................... 있을 것입니다.....좋은..결과가