Could you check gramar? I want to fix it perfectly, but I'm not sure there are mistakes... Could you check grammar? I think my weak point is pronunciation. I think mine is a kind of “Japanese English”. That means it’s close to “Katakana English”. It’s not clear, and it’s monotonous. I should have emphasized some words because some sentences are long, so these sentences might be difficult to understand. My picture and the position of my haiku is also bad. There is no relationship between the picture and my haiku. It was really difficult for me to decide that design. I think I couldn’t make it well.