hi, I need help!
Could anybody chck my motivation letter? I will be gratefull :)
I am writing to apply for the voluntary work as a EVS volunteer.
I am strongly determined to participate in this voluntary work, because it gives me possibility to help other people and in the other hand it helps me to get many important skills.
In this year I finished my education. I have got master degree from economiscs. During my studying I was working in accounting departament in some polish company.
Since 2013 I have been volunteer of the city of Gdańsk. I help in organization of various events and get involved in social assistance. I am open and forgiving what helps me in participating in non-governmental organizations. I am hard-working so I can combine studies with work. As a result, I gain experience and acquire new skills as well as I can in practice use the knowledge I gained in college.I think that participation in voluntary work can become for me the next level of education, because thanks to it I could see how people live in another country, get to knowledge about other cultures and learn to integrate and cooperate with other people. This experience can open new opportunities in my future life.
I believe I would be an ideal candidate for this voluntary work. I am an open, fair-minded person, and determined to developing myself. I would be happy to supply you with further details.
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Could anybody check my motivation letter? I will be grateful :)
I am writing to apply for voluntary work as an EVS volunteer.
I am very much determined to participate in this voluntary work because it gives me the possibility to help other people, while also helping me to gain many important skills.
This past year I finished my education. I have a master's degree in economics. During my studies I was working in the accounting department of some polish company.
Since 2013 I have been a volunteer for the city of Gdańsk. I help in the organization of various events and am involved in social assistance. I am open and forgiving and this helps while I am participating in non-governmental organizations. I am hard-working and capable of multi-tasking, so I can combine studies with work. As a result, I am able to gain experience and acquire new skills while also practicing the use of the knowledge I gained in college.
Additional Details:
I think that participation in voluntary work can become for me the next level of my education. Through it I could see how people live in another country, gather knowledge about other cultures and learn to integrate and cooperate with other people. This experience can open new opportunities in my life.
I believe I would be an ideal candidate for this voluntary work. I am an open, fair-minded person and determined to further develop myself. I would be happy to supply you with further details if you have any questions.
Hope this helps! wasn't able to do much editing since there was no "correction" option but good luck on your application!
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I am writing to apply for voluntary work as a EVS volunteer.
I am strongly determined to participate in this voluntary work, because it gives me the possibility to help other people and it also helps me to learn many important skills.
This year I graduated from (school? college? university?) with a masters degree in economics. During my studying I was also working in accounting departament in some polish company. (perhaps it would be a good idea to say what polish company)
Since 2013 I have been volunteer in the city of Gdańsk. I have helped organize various events and i also involved in social assistance. I have an open and forgiving and that helps me to participate in non-governmental organizations. I am hard-working so I can combine studies with work. As a result, I gain experience and acquire new skills at the same time as practiceing useing the knowledge that I gained in college.
Additional Details:
I think that participation in voluntary work can become, for me, the next level of education. i thinj that it can allow me to see how people live in another country,learn about other cultures and learn to integrate and cooperate with other people. This experience can open new opportunities in my future life.
I believe I would be an ideal candidate for this voluntary work, because i am an open, fair-minded person, and determined to develop myself. I would be happy to supply you with further details.
i have just sorted the gramatical errors, but if you want any more input just ask.
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