Could anyone please help me to make my English sentence to sound more natural?
The sentences as follows:

I heard you have an excellence tomato source recipe. May I know a little about it? Could you reveal it a little to me?

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Could anyone please help me to make my English sentence to sound more natural?
The sentences as follows:

I heard you have an excellence tomato source recipe. May I know a little about it? Could you reveal it a little to me?

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I heard you have an EXCELLENT tomato SAUCE recipe. May I know a little about it? Please could you tell me a little about it?

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I heard you have an excellent tomato SAUCE (not source) recipe.  Would you mind sharing it with me? Thanks!

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I have heard you make excellent tomato sauce. Could you please share the recipe with me/ would you mind sharing the recipe with me?

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I heard you have an excellent tomato sauce recipe, could you tell me a little about it?