I came across an online article about "Volcano in Antarctica" and I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points.
As a symbol of ice sheet and sea ice melt by global warming, what the sea surface rises and salt concentration change are well-known. There is more to it than that. The recent research showed ice sheet reduction can have something to do with volcanic activity increase. There are 100 or more volcano in huge volcanic belt called west-south lift system in Antarctica. The open access research result showed volcanic activity can increase in this area if ice sheet keeps melting at this rate. Ice sheet is pushing down the Earth's crust with their enormous mass. Reducing ice causes the Earth's crust to rise a bit. The flow of underground magma changes by this rise, and lost its balance. It finally can cause a volcanic eruption. If several volcanic eruptions occur at the same time, things will worse drastically. It's highly unlikely that kind of thing happens, but it might occur in the future. Volcanos on the earth and under ice coexist in Antarctica and both of them can activate. Their eruption can create ozone hole and cause glaciers to melt. We need to pay attention to this issue because it also might be imminent threat to Antarctica's beauty.
Honestly, I'm very scared and have no idea how all living things including humans will be affected if this happens in the future. In that sense, I hope volcanic activity continues subsiding if possible.
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I came across an online article about "Volcanoes in Antarctica," and I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points.
As signs of ice-sheet and sea-ice melting caused by global warming, rising sea levels and changes in salt concentration are well known. However, there is more to it than that.
Recent research has shown that the reduction of ice sheets may be linked to an increase in volcanic activity. There are more than 100 volcanoes in a huge volcanic belt called the West Antarctic Rift System in Antarctica. The results of an open-access study showed that volcanic activity in this area could increase if the ice sheets continue to melt at the current rate.
The ice sheet pushes down on the Earth's crust because of its enormous mass. As the ice melts, the Earth's crust rises slightly. This uplift can change the flow of underground magma and disrupt its balance, which could eventually trigger a volcanic eruption.
If several volcanic eruptions were to occur at the same time, the situation could become much worse. It is highly unlikely that such an event will happen, but it could occur in the future.
Volcanoes on and beneath the ice coexist in Antarctica, and both types could become more active. Their eruptions could contribute to the formation of an ozone hole and cause glaciers to melt further. We need to pay attention to this issue because it could also pose an imminent threat to the natural beauty of Antarctica.
Honestly, I'm very scared, and I have no idea how all living things, including humans, would be affected if this happened in the future. In that sense, I hope volcanic activity continues to subside, if possible.
Level: C1.
Your writing is detailed, well organised, and easy to follow. You explain the possible connection between ice-sheet melting and volcanic activity clearly, and you use a good range of vocabulary related to climate change, geology, and the environment. The main areas to improve are natural collocations, articles, plural forms, verb structures, and conditional sentences. Your final paragraph also expresses your personal reaction naturally and effectively. Excellent work! 😊
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I came across an online article about a "Volcano in Antarctica" and I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points.
Ice sheets and sea ice melt caused by global warming, and the resulting rise in ocean levels and salt concentration changes are well-known. There is more to it than that. Recent research showed ice sheet reduction can have something to do with volcanic activity increase. There are 100 or more volcanoes in a huge volcanic belt called the west-south lift system in Antarctica. The open access research results showed volcanic activity can increase in this area if ice sheets keeps melting at this rate. Ice sheets push down on the Earth's crust with their enormous mass. Reducing ice causes the Earth's crust to rise a bit. The flow of underground magma changes by this rise, and loses its balance. It can finally cause a volcanic eruption. If several volcanic eruptions occur at the same time, things will worsen drastically. It's highly unlikely that kind of thing happens, but it might occur in the future. Volcanoes on the earth surface and under the ice coexist in Antarctica and both of them can activate. Their eruption can create an ozone hole and cause glaciers to melt. We need to pay attention to this issue because it also might be an imminent threat to Antarctica's beauty.
Honestly, I'm very scared and have no idea how all living things, including humans, will be affected if this happens in the future. In that sense, I hope volcanic activity continues subsiding if possible.
I saw this article, interesting and scary at the same time.
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I came across an online article about volcanoes in Antarctica, and I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points.
The rise in sea levels and changes in salt concentration caused by the melting of ice sheets and sea ice due to global warming are well known. But there is more to it than that. Recent research has shown that the reduction of ice sheets may also be related to an increase in volcanic activity.
There are 100 or more volcanoes in a huge volcanic belt in Antarctica. The research showed that volcanic activity could increase in this area if the ice sheet keeps melting at this rate. The ice sheet pushes down on the Earth’s crust with its enormous mass. As the amount of ice decreases, the Earth’s crust rises slightly. This can change the flow of underground magma and disturb its balance, which could eventually cause a volcanic eruption.
If several volcanic eruptions occurred at the same time, things could get much worse. It is highly unlikely that this kind of thing will happen, but it might occur in the future. Volcanoes on the surface and under the ice coexist in Antarctica, and both can become active. Their eruptions could cause glaciers to melt.
We need to pay attention to this issue because it might also become a threat to Antarctica’s beauty. Honestly, I’m very scared and have no idea how all living things, including humans, would be affected if this happened in the future. In that sense, I hope volcanic activity remains low if possible.
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