Here are my nephew's two speeches for his competition.Please check it and which one is better?Thanks Hello,everyone. My nephew will have an English speech competition. Here are my nephew's two speeches for his competition, please help me check and correct it, then tell me which one is better than the other one ? Thank you very much. 1、The first one Today my topic is "Animal". Do you like animals? Nearly everybody likes animals. Some of people like dogs, because they can help us. Someone likes rabbits, because they're cute. Do you know what my favorite animal is? It is one of the most precious animals. They live in the ocean and good at swimming. They are very cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, but are also smart. Most of their color is gray, only a small number of it are white. Though they look like fish, they are mammals. Because of their high IQ, dolphins can be trained by people. They can learn things very quickly and do all the actions accurate. They are very friendly.Can you guess its name now? Yes, you are right. They are dolphins. However, as we all known, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. if we don't protect them, maybe well lose our good friends some day. As a student, I hope more and more people should protect dolphins. I love dolphins very much. and I hope dolphins are our good friends forever. I hope they can live in the blue sea happily and peacefully. Let's protect the animals together. Let's take actions now. 2、The second one Today my topic is" Birthday" .Many people are celebrate birthday all over the world.Because birthday is one of the most important days in their lives.On April 20th is my birthday, I always have happy feelings on my birthday.Because many people, including my family and friends, had congratulated on me! Every year, they all came to my small party I had for my birthday, brought me birthday presents and said happy birthday to me. Sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. My mother always made birthday cake and cooked some delicious food for us on my birthday. Then my friends helped me put the candles on the big cake. Every time I always made three birthday wishes. We ate together, sang together ,danced together and played funny games together. We were very happy to be together. Oh, I still remember last birthday I got a funny name "magic boy", because I showed a magic to them, they all felt very magical. Do you want to see this magic, well ,next time I will show to you

animal Animal Hello, everyone. Im Hansom. I m a nine-year-old boy. Im very happy to stand here and give you a short speech, I hope that you will also have a happy day. Today my topic is Animal. Do you like animals? Nearly everybody likes animals. Some of people like dogs, because they can help us. Someone likes rabbits, because theyre cuteDo you know what my favorite animal is? It is one of the most precious animals. They live in the ocean and good at swimming. They are very cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, but are also smart. Most of their color is gray, only a small number of it are white. Though they look like fish, they are mammals. Because of their high IQ, dolphins can be trained by people. They can learn things very quickly and do all the actions accurate. They are very friendly. Can you guess its name now? Yes, you are right. They are dolphins. However, as we all known, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. if we dont protect them, maybe well lose our good friends some day. As a student, I hope more and more people should protect dolphins. I love dolphins very much. and I hope dolphins are our good friends forever. I hope they can live in the blue sea happily and peacefully. Lets protect the animals together. Lets take actions now. Thats all . Thank you very much .

a speech competition such as Star of Outlook English talent competition

if you are primary student,a speech competition such as Star of Outlook English talent competition,then two topic "animals" and "birthday",which one is much more better ?