could you please tell me what does "In terms of turnover" mean? example: In just a few decades, the videogame industry has become a lot bigger than the film bussiness. In terms of turnover, what is rather grandly called "enteractive entertainment" make twice as much money as Hollywood cinema.

could you help me correct my letter and comment on it? Dear Mrs Susan Brown, I have seen the advertisement on the local magazine. I am interested in this very much. I am writting to get more information. Could you tell me the specific of the school's address and where the nearest underground station is? I wonder how many students in a class and what facilities teacher use to teach us. I would like to know if the school is open during the first week of June. What dates could I register at the school? I would love if classes last in the end of the summer. Beside the lessons at the school, what sort of leisure activities could be arranged? I would like going to the museums to have knowledge about history. In additon, could you tell me what sort of accommodation is available? Does it include hostel, food, beverage free? The last, I would like to know if the price includes the cost of accommodation?. I would welcome the opportunity of studying in your school. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely, Hang

Could You Help Me Correct My Preface???!!!! I was born and grew up in Ha Tinh province. Now, I am studying and working in Hue province. Two years ago, I went to Hue for study. That is the first time I come here. The first days living in Hue, I was really shock with almost things here. It is very different far from my hometown – Ha Tinh province. It is not a province with famous tumbs and the Imperial city. It is also an interesting place with a lot of strange things. From my view, I always want to write some things to show my feelings, my view about what I experienced and what shocked me much. But I could not write any more because I do not have enough motivation as well as clear aim to write. Now, thank to teacher Hoang Tinh Bao and Cross Culture Communication Subject, my ideas come true. Although my findings does not express enough information about the differences of the Ha Tinh and Hue provincesculture, it can show some typical differences in cultural aspects that is really useful and interesting. I want to say thank you to teacher Tran Huy Bao who help me organize and complete my study. Student Nguyen Diem Hang

please, help me correct and also comment on my paragraph The culture of the Ha Tinh and Hue provinces express partly the variety of Vietnamese culture. Each one has different features because they are differents from life style, culture and history. Some similarities between two provinces are they all believe in Gods, they have spiritual beliefs, they all respect and tribute the deceased… All the similarities make up general features of Vietnamese culture. The differences in religion, superstitious, the way to worship ancestors and the deceased and life style make up variety in culture of Vietnamese. Somethings is popular in this province but it is taboo in another one. There are no “rights” and “wrongs” in culture. The similarities and differences of the Hatinh and Hue provinces contribute to make up Central culture in particular and Vietnamese culture in general. They all make up a very beautiful Vietnam today.

please help me to correct my pharagraph!!!! Today, fast food and street food are popular all over the world in general and Vietnam in particular. however, according to my finding, very rare street food in Ha Tinh. According to people here, using street food will be very harmful for health, because of dust, car fumes, dirt and many reasons related to safety foodst people here are often used food in restaurant or homemade. Different from Ha Tinh, one of the features of Hue is street food. Hue is estimated as 1 in 3 provinces having diverse, rich and delicious street food in Vietnam. you can easily find street food in any street in Hue. street food is usually fish soup, beef noodles, sticky rice, tea, rice cakes... food can be sold in place, with the tiny colorful table and knee high, chair is tiny and low like primary school children's. Or maybe you have to eat without seats because they are vendors. According to people here, street foods are nutritious, delicious and cheap. In addition, you can eat fast or carry away if you like.

street cuisine in the Hatinh province and the Hue province (Vietnam) Today, fast food and street food are popular all over the world in general and Vietnam in particular. however, according to my finding, very rare street food in Ha Tinh. According to people here, using street food will be very harmful for health, because of dust, car fumes, dirt and many reasons related to safety foodst people here are often used food in restaurant or homemade. Different from Ha Tinh, one of the features of Hue is street food. Hue is estimated as 1 in 3 provinces having diverse, rich and delicious street food in Vietnam. you can easily find street food in any street in Hue. street food is usually fish soup, beef noodles, sticky rice, tea, rice cakes... food can be sold in place, with the tiny colorful table and knee high, chair is tiny and low like primary school children's. Or maybe you have to eat without seats because they are vendors. According to people here, street foods are nutritious, delicious and cheap. In addition, you can eat fast or carry away if you like.

the differences of the worship of ancestors and the deceased between the Hatinh and the Hue province The worship of ancestors and the deceased is an old custom of Vietnam. Like many other provinces, every family in Hatinh province has a shrine in its. Every year, people do cult for the deceased one time, that is on the death's date. On that day, they make a tray with full of foods such as chicken, pork, beef, rice sticky, sweet dessert and then put it on the shrine. On anniversary of the death, the host invite their cousins to join. The first three years, people cry for the death, but after the first three year the host invite all people in their village and their friends. If you don not know, you maybe think that is a big happy party. Because people feast and cheer. They think that the death were laid to rest. In the Hue province, beside having a shrine inside house, they also put two or three small shrines outside. They do one main cult every year and invite only their kins and nextdoor. Especially, they have two small cults every month, at the beginning of month and in the middle of month. In contrast to Hatinh, people here do not make tray with full of meat. They prepare diverse cuisines, but most of them are made from vegetables. Kind of foods to worship are depend on months. Sometime they prepare meat, sometime vegetables, even thought they prepare onle cassava root, batata or fruits. They put worship's tray in the street and in frond of house. Morever, people here also prepare big offering, such as a lot of hades money, big paper clothes, shoes and many other strange things. After finishing the cult, they burn all offering on the sidewalk. All the street, at that time, are full of smoke, ashes, especially the day of losing capital - May 23th.

Please comment on and help me correct my pharagraph. I am writting about culture Religion occupies a very small portion of population of Hatinh province, it is about 19%, mainly Christianity and Buddhism. Christianity is the majority, the rest are Buddhism. That is the reason why there are very few temples and churches across the province. There is no big ritual of Buddhism and Christianity here. People here mostly do not follow any religion, but they worship their ancestor and the father of nation, that is great President Ho Chi Minh. Contrasty to Hatinh, nearly 100% of the Hue province's population follow religion. Religion in Hue is variety, there are Buddhism, Christianity, Hinduism and many others.Buddhism occupies the majority of population. There are many big rituals celebrated every year, such as Vesak, Mother Bodhisattva, full moon in July... In this time, people decorate houses, streets, specially Pagodas and temples. Even though they decorate cars, trucks with a lot of flowers, lights, statues, pictures and slogans. They drive these cars cross all streets inside and outside city. The rituals last two or three days. Morever, at that time, most people wear uniform called "ao lam". Every family eat vegetarian. You can find no meat in the market at this time. Especially, they make a big vegetarian party in Pagoda. Vegetarian dishes are diverse with different flavors and shapes. Many dishes look like chicken, beef steak, beef humberger, pork... but they are all made from vegetables, nuts, mushrooms and fungis

Please help me correct and comment on my pharagraph. I am writting about culture The Hatinh and Hue province are both located in the Central of Vietnam. Therefore they have some cultural similarities that is closed with daily life. According to the ancient, everything has a soul. So they wworship the Sun god, Moon god, the God of the Land, the River god, Poseidon, god of thunder, Rain god...the gods are associated with their agricultural dreams. Going deeper into daily life, they also worship the Deity that is associated with the spiritual life. They worship the Imperial city, the nation heroes who had great contributions for the country or village. People worship gods for gratitude and also for hoping that god bless them. The ancestor and deceased's worship is an old custom of Vietnamese. The Hue and Hatinh province are in no exception. People believe that the spririts of ancestors is always by their side and bless them. That is the reason why every family have a shrine in their houses.