the view of the paradise I wish I found a place where I could breathe where my imagination could exist let me show you ......x4 take my hand and go for a walk we can enjoy the view of the paradise the same one we used to think of when we were young in fact you and I know what it's the world wasn't made for us let's go away...oh oh the view of the paradise.... Hi,there! It would be great if someone could read this ... I think it's going to be a song in the near future... :P I'd like to receive some feedback on my grammar Thanks a lot!

What do you think about foreign teachers becoming English teachers?

Considering that I'm going to become an English teacher in the near future, It's very important for me to know what do you English native speakers think of us as the facilitators of your language. Any advice o suggestion would be welcome :) (please correct me if necessary, thanks!)