Who can correct them for me? ............ My first essay Today, I want to write about my eldest sister, Now, I’m very like to describe her. Her name is Ngoc, She is twenty five years old, She is good listener, She always listens my problem and gives me advices. She can make me better. So that, It is a reason I want to write about her. First, She is a very caring, She always has a kind word to everyone. Last year, When we traveling, She prepared to plan for the tour very fast and cautious. Now, She having a baby girl and she buys clothes to her daughter super cute. Every morning, She goes to super market to buys foods and she cooks well. I enjoyed fried chicken from her and it tastes super tasty. Second, She is hard-working. Everyday, She gets up very early, she makes breakfast for my family and does housework. She is an accountant, she worked for my father’s business. She works on a computer and counts money very fast, She works very efficient. Third, She is very gracious. She took care of my friends when they visited my home. She has smooth-tongued, Her neighbor really like to talk with her. She made my parents feel satisfied with own business, when I have trouble, she always help me solves. Her friends always call her hang out. And finally, She is sentimental. She really like drama film when she free. Five years ago, she had a cute dog, When it died, she cried a lot. When I sad, she made me smile and bought a lot of games for me. On mother’s day, She said thank you mom in a card and gave mom a dress. I like her very much. She like a second mom in my life. It’s my great my eldest sister.

My sister :D My first essay............. Today, I want to write about my eldest sister, Now, I’m very like to describe her. Her name is Ngoc, She is twenty five years old, She is good listener, She always listens my problem and gives me advices. She can make me better. So that, It is a reason I want to write about her. First, She is a very caring, She always has a kind word to everyone. Last year, When we traveling, She prepared to plan for the tour very fast and cautious. Now, She having a baby girl and she buys clothes to her daughter super cute. Every morning, She goes to super market to buys foods and she cooks well. I enjoyed fried chicken from her and it tastes super tasty. Second, She is hard-working. Everyday, She gets up very early, she makes breakfast for my family and does housework. She is an accountant, she worked for my father’s business. She works on a computer and counts money very fast, She works very efficient. Third, She is very gracious. She took care of my friends when they visited my home. She has smooth-tongued, Her neighbor really like to talk with her. She made my parents feel satisfied with own business, when I have trouble, she always help me solves. Her friends always call her hang out. And finally, She is sentimental. She really like drama film when she free. Five years ago, she had a cute dog, When it died, she cried a lot. When I sad, she made me smile and bought a lot of games for me. On mother’s day, She said thank you mom in a card and gave mom a dress. I like her very much. She like a second mom in my life. It’s my great my eldest sister.

help me ! how do you decribe ''gracious'' with vebs ?

i don't know to use idioms ''Make up one's mind'', Do you have an example to me ?

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Sunday on sunday morning, i learn english, I do homework with my friend so that i can have a good lesson. In the afternoon , I go out with my friend and we go fishing , go camping , go swimming. When I go home I see a beautiful screen . I think it very romantic with a lot of flower. When i have free time I'll go there with my girlfriend. In th evening, i spent my time fo my family.

Mr and Mrs.Brown Mr and Mrs.Brown are very active people. They do a lot of interesting activities every day of a week. On monday, they go to the museum. On tuesday they see a play .On evening wednesday, they go to the concert. On thursday, they take a karate lesson. On friday, they go dacing in club. On saturday, they see a movie. On sunday, they play cards with their friend.