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Prophetic chain of events
Everything in life happens for a reason so, as to teach you a lesson for the future. Sometimes happens good, sometimes bad but every preceding event has a covert impact on events to happen. When you desire of anything it lasts as long as is not fulfilled. Once, It is accomplished, does remain desire anymore. Things lose their essence when they become achievable. All desires, wishes are ephemeral as this mortal world is. We are more illusionist than realistic intrinsically like when we are in our childhood we dreams of being birds, superman, even though it is beyond our capabilities. Our dreams are mostly illusory that enable us to realize our imaginative hypothetical world. We are averse to accept realities; therefore, most of us live in denial.
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Nội dung này vi phạm Các nguyên tắc Cộng đồng của chúng tôi.4 tháng 5 năm 2015
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Natural catastrophes- dark forces of nature
Natural disasters come uninvited and wash out everything that comes in the way. World has been prone to natural catastrophes that have taken lives of hundreds of thousands people. Recently, earthquake hit Nepal week ago, worst in past eight decades has claimed the lives of more than 6,200 people leaving 20,000 displaced while death toll still continues to rise, and rescue teams are busy in digging rubble to save people trapped inside/under ruble. The magnitude of earthquake recorded/scaled on the Richter scale found to be 7.8. Nepal is suffering from the worst humanitarian crisis, shortage of food and scarcity of clean water exposes the quake affected people to diarrhea and gastric diseases. Time is running short, Nepal is in dire need of humanitarian assistance that includes rescue workers, tents, food, water and doctors. Neighboring countries, India and China, including Pakistan have step up in this very hour of need and sent out the teams of rescue workers, medical staff and planes. The Nepalese President has urged the UN and the whole world help out Nepal in curbing worst Natural catastrophic crisis of the 21st century. Heavy rains and series of aftershocks following the earthquake have traumatized people, and people are afraid to go back home. Heavy rains have caused landslides that slowed down the process of rehabilitation. Avalanches on the world’s highest peak have killed almost 20 ill-fated tourists, came for expedition to reach the summit.
Thanks for reading!
check and find out grammatical mistakes, misplaced words suggestions are welcomed
Regards: Farhan Ahmed
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Oppressed Nations
Kashmir and Palestine are the most oppressed nations on the face of the Earth. The UN should hold a plebiscite in both Indian occupied Kashmir as well as Pakistan-occupied Kashmir whether they want to become a party to either of countries or stay Independent state. The people of Kashmir have already suffered a lot because of Islamist jihadists and Indian security forces. India has deployed 700,000 ground troops in Indian occupied Kashmir.
Suggestions are welcomed :)
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Asian Tigers
Peaceful Pakistan and India is necessary for world peace. Both countries possess nuclear weapons and bitter arch-rivals since the partition of British India. Three fierce wars in 1947-1948,1965 and 1971 have been fought till now. Still now, the long-standing Kashmir dispute remains unresolved and escalating tensions on the borders, sometimes frequent fire exchange takes place. India is world's emerging economy and continues to flourish while the economy of Pakistan continues to sink. Pakistan's alliance with the USA in the war against Al-Qaeda in Afghanistan and the war on terror against hardline Islamist Taliban has adversely affected the slumping economy. Not only that, suicide bomb attacks, sectarian conflicts, and ethnic segregation pose an existential threat to Pakistan. On the other side, India has reached out to the USA, Canada and other regional countries for trade to bolster its economy. Well, India is on the brighter side and better placed as compared to Pakistan. If we compare Pakistan with the India, where it stands, stats are not too good. India is world's fourth largest economy. Diplomatic relations between two countries has always been in hot water.
The two countries are at loggerheads over the disputed territory of Kashmir.
Kashmir Conflict:
At the time of British India partition, the Kashmir, a predominantly Muslim populated was ruled by Hindu Raja Hari Singh Dogar. Due to the Muslim majority, Pakistan expected the Kashmir annexation to Pakistan. Hari Singh signed its accession to India against the will of Kashmiri people, which led to first war break out between recently independent countries.
Suggestions are welcome :))
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Poverty is curse
Poverty is one of the biggest issues of the 21st century, but no one pays serious attention and efforts to resolve it. Hundreds of thousand people dying due to the shortage of food, and clean water. Children are suffering from malnutrition and unhealthy food exposes them to crippling diseases. Poor is getting poorest and rich is becoming richer every day. People don't have sufficient money to manage their expenses of household. Poverty in its worst form forces girls to become the prostitute or commit suicide. Those who do not have a home, live on streets. There is no hope, futures looks bleak.The earth is on the brink of catastrophe, stronger countries are eyeing on weaker countries to expand their influence and expand exploit natural resources making
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Menace of Terrorism (Introductory Paragraph of an Essay)
Terrorism is an act of killing, harassing, horrifying and inciting violence among peaceful Public. It has made life tough live/living normally. Terrorism is against all the Ethical norms and violation of human rights. World has witnessed thousands of People felling prey to this pandemic of terrorism. No country on world map is free from its menace. More or less, It does exist in every country taking different shapes. Somewhere It is in form of religious extremism and somewhere it is in form of racism.
All Suggestions are welcome :) I have put slash at places I felt confused. I will be adding more related paragraphs to justify topic.
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Thoughtful Tuesday ( my first entry )
Wednesday was quite frustrating for me because I was unable to write down anything even after reading so many Articles on same issue. Ideas came to mind were vague and confusing, no flow of thoughts it made me feel so frustrated about my endeavor to improve my English Essay writing Skills. if i cannot shape my thoughts into words then how possible I become good writer. Conveying message in most efficient and easy way so that reader/checker understand it without any difficulty is virtue of good communicator. For that, clarity of thoughts is elementary.I feel I have following deficiencies/shortcomings that need to be addressed.
1. I cannot express my thoughts clearly.
2. grammatical errors.
3. selection of words and their appropriate usage.
My area of interest is reading newspapers, magazines, blogs, editorials especially from BBC, Al-Jazeera, RT and Dawn. As you all know that BBC and Al-Jazeera are world's renowned news channels. I am having hard time in reading them. Therefore, What I do is underline difficult words, seek(look up) their meaning in world famous Oxford Advance Learner's dictionary. After doing that i use them in making sentences by writing on the same topic from where words were underlined.
My core interest is writing good critical Analytical Articles on burning Political Issues.It is not possible until i understand news articles through skimming without underlining words and then developing my own ideas.
This was what going on mind from yesterday.
I hope my write up didn't not sound weird to those who read :) Suggestions are welcome
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Thoughtful Tuesday
Wednesday was quite frustrating for me because I was unable to write down anything even after reading so many Articles on same issue. Ideas came to mind were vague and confusing, no flow of thoughts it made me feel so frustrated about my endeavor to improve my English Essay writing Skills. if i cannot shape my thoughts into words then how possible I become good writer. Conveying message in most efficient and easy way so that reader/checker understand it without any difficulty is virtue of good communicator. For that, clarity of thoughts is elementary.I feel I have following deficiencies/shortcomings that need to be addressed.
1. I cannot express my thoughts clearly.
2. grammatical errors.
3. selection of words and their appropriate usage.
My area of interest is reading newspapers, magazines, blogs, editorials especially from BBC, Al-Jazeera, RT and Dawn. As you all know that BBC and Al-Jazeera are world's renowned news channels. I am having hard time in reading them. Therefore, What I do is underline difficult words, seek(look up) their meaning in world famous Oxford Advance Learner's dictionary. After doing that i use them in making sentences by writing on the same topic from where words were underlined.
My core interest is writing good critical Analytical Articles on burning Political Issues.It is not possible until i understand news articles through skimming without underlining words and then developing my own ideas.
This was what going on mind from yesterday.
I hope my write up didn't not sound weird to those who read :) Suggestions are welcome.
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