TOEFL Writing independent Question

The expression 'Never, never give up ' means to keep trying and never stop working for your goal.

Do you agree or disagree with this statment ??

Use specific reasons and example to support your answer .

I think that there are various opiniones to this topic.

I agree with the expression”Never, never give up”.

There are two reasons .

Before i will show you first reason , i want to tell you that i think that expression must be included correct methods .

First reason is that if any you continue to effort without a correct method, it is so far from your goal.

For example , A student is studying hard to enter a college . The student is not good at math, but the student only is studying English so hard for long times. Actually it is good in studying respect, but in entering college respect , He waste so many times. That’s why i disagree with only giving up.

Second reason is that it is very wasteful after they maid efforts.

For example , there are two archaeologists digging some fossils .

One archaeologist gave up digging for 20min, but another archeologist didn’t give up digging until 30 min. Then he found some fossil, which means he succeeded in finding some fossils.

If former archeologist hadn’t give up , he could have found some fossils .

What i want to show you is that it is so wasteful to give up after efforts.

That’s why i agree with the expression”Never, never give up .