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Corrija las siguientes oraciones. Por favor.
Me encontré con mi novia en la estación hoy a las 10 en punto. Después de eso, fuimos a un centro comercial y compramos ropa de invierno en una tienda de ropa. Después de eso, fuimos a un restaurante mexicano de moda para almorzar y comimos brito. Después de que terminamos de almorzar, teníamos sueño, así que tomamos una siesta durante aproximadamente una hora. Después de despertarnos de una siesta, nos dirigimos al lugar para asistir a un concierto de música. Allí escuchamos las canciones de nuestros artistas favoritos. Finalmente, nos fuimos a casa después de ir al karaoke.
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Por favor corrige mi oración. "Cuando tenía 15 años"
Cuando tenía 15 años vivía cerca de la estación de la Universidad de Gakugei en Meguro.
No hay una universidad llamada "Universidad Gakugei" cerca de esta estación ahora, pero es famosa porque conserva su nombre incluso después de que la universidad se reubica.
La calle comercial frente a la estación estaba llena de vida. Las compras diarias también eran convenientes. Es conveniente porque hay muchos trenes que se pueden usar, ya que el expreso también se detiene.
Además, puede disfrutar de paseos en bote en el parque e interactuar con pequeños animales y ponis.
También hay una gran iglesia en la ciudad. Yo y mi familia fuimos a rezar por Navidad.
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Please check and correct my grammar and words in English.
First and foremost, I do think that we should be considered this issue separately between an alcohol’s problem and a cigarette’s one. That’s why these problems differ in types of impact on society.
First, cigarette vending machines should be removed from Japanese streets. This is the reason why cigarette vending machines can be led to promote the consumption of tobacco. Needless to say, cigarettes have a bad effect on our body such as lung cancer. Marlboro, one of the most famous brands of tobacco says warning messages on the packaging that “Smoking seriously harms you and others around you”. Although cigarettes have merit on an economy in terms of increased tax revenue, it will return the cost of social security such as medical expenses. After all, cigarettes just leave our poor health.
Second, cigarette vending machines have a bad impact on the landscape of Japanese streets, because they make cigarette butts on there. Also, if you mess up one step it might turn out burning. So, they advocate not just polluting streets but also a huge fire in cities.
Now, I suppose that beer vending machines need not removed from Japanese streets but they should be obligated to check age by ID card such as <em style="color: rgb(28, 30, 41);">taspo</em>. The reason why I think beer ones don’t need to remove from there is alcohol has few bad effects on society and they have fewer criticisms about human health care than cigarettes. Yet, it’s a problem that minors could buy beers easily, do not be checked their age, so we should lay down rules for age-verification strictly by ID card.
To sum up, we should remove cigarette vending machines from Japanese streets. The first reason is to protect health. The second one is that cigarette butts often mar the landscape and these litters contribute to burn. Then, we do not need to remove beer ones from there. The reason why alcohol has a low effect and risk on society and minor drinking could be prevented if the IC card system makes use of it.
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Please check and correct my draft in English
*This essay is still draft.
First and foremost, I do think that we should be considered this issue separately between an alcohol’s problem and a cigarette’s one. That’s why these problems differ in types of impact on society.
First, cigarette vending machines should be removed from Japanese streets. This is the reason why cigarette vending machines can be led to promote consumption of the tobacco. Needless to say, cigarettes have a bad effect on our body such as a lung cancer. Marlboro, one of the most famous brand of tobacco says on packaging warning messages that “Smoking seriously harms you and others around you”. Although cigarettes have a merit on an economy in terms of increasing tax revenue, it will return the cost of social security such as medical expenses. After all, cigarettes just leave our poor health.
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What is your favorite Anime?
Hey guys! I love Anime, and then I want to know what is popular Anime in the world recently.
So, please tell me your favorite Anime and I'd like to know the reason if you don't mind.
I also look for my English partners.Please send me a message if you would be interested!!
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What is your favorite Anime?
Hey guys! I love Anime, and then I want to know what is popular Anime in the world recently.
So, please tell me your favorite Anime and I'd like to know the reason if you don't mind.
I also look for my English partners.Please send me a message if you would be interested!!
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Could you be my English partner?
Hi everyone , my name is Ken
I'm Japanese and I want practice my English.My English skill is intermediate.
I can teach you Japanese as exchange!
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Vending Machines in Japan
Japan has one of the world's highest vending machine densities. Machines can be found all over cities, towns and even in the countryside.
Then, what is the good and bad things about vending machines ?
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My profile. Please check and correct !!
Hello!!
I want to make language partners!! Please send a message!!
Please teache me English!!
I can teach Japanese!!
I'm Japanese and live in Tokyo.
I'm a university freshman that major in law.
My hubby is an anime, manga and world history.
I want to use English fluently and make foreign friends because I want to touch many varieties of cultures and thoughts.
Furthermore, I want to go abroad, so I have to take over 80points in the TOEFL test.
Also, I study Spanish, so I'm glad that teaching it too !!
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