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Rachel - the Song
(An amateur punk-rock musicial from a remote Ukrainian town begging you, english speakers, to edit the lyrics of his immodest song)
"Rachel"
Ahh… such a beautiful girl’s walking up the street
Her red dress blows up and there are white strings… ya
She tries to hold it down and doesn’t even blush
She tries to hold it down and doesn’t even blush
Barely showed up see-through strings…ya
She’s so good looking upskirt
Barely showed up see-through strings…ya
She’s so good looking upskirt
I dared to say : “Tonight you’re mine”
The girl was sure she’ll fuck a guy
And so was I, she knew we’re tight
So, come on, Rachel, make things right
I can’t remember clearly what was next
‘cause after wine we had beer too
Yet we both agreed and
We definitely needed to continue...
A hundred times I’ve sworn to stop
I wish I could get rid of these immoral tricks
But a chick is so hot, to hell those thoughts
Who cares for a promise when a girl ready to blow
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I need help with this lyrics
(An amateur punk-rock musicial from a remote Ukrainian town begging you, english speakers, to edit the lyrics of his immodest song)
Someone so attractive someone so cute
Always wanna be protected
From me
From you
All what we are!
She really needed to be heard
And here’s favorite spring season
We didn’t learn yet to control our feelings
And that becomes more interesting!
In bloom it’s hard not to smell a scent
It’s the center of our concern
Kinda life-giving essence
To breed the descendents!
Evil deeds are routine matter
Therefore no sense to refrain (pretend)
Or resist a spoiled nature
To deprive yourself a pleasure!
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Payback (my song lyrics). Please, can you help to improve it?
Payback
Young girls ruin their beauty in a porno industry
Do you know its gonna hurt too deep, crush personality
I don't want to believe in this
This is all unforgivable
When you sell yourself to old ugly males
Did you come from nowhere?
When you live like sexual slave
Is it sounds great?
I don't want to see this shit no more
You’re not the whore
Little stupid is not so cute, yeah
Someday you gonna payback
Little stupid is not so smart
With this you won’t go far
Teen girls are looking for action get money any kind of fee
Have you any idea what it means? Imagine consequence !
I don't want to believe in this
This is all unforgivable
When you ready to be used by them
Is it your fabulous scene?
When you give yourself as product
Is this what you dreamt?
I don't want to see this shit no more
You’re not the whore
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Could help...or not ? (song lyrics. Could someone please edit it?)
Could help...or not ?
*verse*
Her problems is not my business
It was before I don’t wanna do it anymore
Like unexpected rain in sunny weather
From time to time, you fall on my head....
*chorus*
So how do we resolve the issue
Maybe if somebody would do something
...make a step toward another
It could help ...
Possibly it could help possibly not ?!
But it will never be forgotten / YEAH /
*verse*
I know she used to get the best
But it's not always going great
Or maybe it's because I'm selfish
When you want me I'm only hurt you
And I don’t give a fuck how to explain that
The only one thought make me survive
I don't wanna be in love, no
I don't wanna be in love, no
I don't wanna be in love, no
You are the one wrong person!
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How can I learn to write better song lyrics in english?
I write lyrics for my punk rock band, but my lyrics is not really good. sometimes I can't express myself, or I express and nobody understands, or it just sounds not so good. How can I improve these skills?
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about me
Ok. My life Philosophy is :"It’s better to burn out than to fade away"
I didn't learn english at school,and then epiphany has come..lol...i like to create music and also to write the songs on english...but it was mess at that times. So i decided to fix it and get it better. Improve my English
I need Help with my lyrics
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