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English essay This is my homework of university. The topic is Japan's aging population. Also this is research paragraph. Please edit any grammar mistakes. To furthermore investigate the topic of the pension, this paragraph focuses on qualitative interviews. I think that the problem of pension is causing by Japan’s aging population. Therefore, to gather people’s opinions about Japan’s aging population, I inquired five people about this question : Would you describe what is the most source of Japan’s aging population? Then I created two categories for the responses : great improvement of medical and falling birthrate. By “great improvement of medical”, I mean that compared to the previous medical care in Japan, current Japanese medical has been developed. By “falling birthrate”, I am referring to low birth rate of children will promote aging population. Three people responded with great improvement of medical. They remarked that there was a disease that could not be cured before, but recently, many lives have been saved by advances in medical technology in Japan. Say in other words, one of the causes of aging population in Japan, that related to medical technology of the highest level in the world, it also says the best of life expectancy in the world. On the other hand, two people responded with falling birth rate. According to them, by the number of children has been decreased by falling birthrate, it is impossible to balance of the number of children and the elderly. So, most people have the illusion that aging population is progressing, because the number of elderly people is greater than the number of children. From these results, aging is caused by a variety of factors. Therefore, in order to solve the problem of aging, it is necessary to solve the fundamental problem. Furthermore, among the people I interviewed, majority believe that there are the Japanese system ​​that often focus on the elderly, so it is necessary to provide the system for children.
24 tháng 10 năm 2013
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My writing homework It is my writing homework in my university's English class. The topic is globalization is good or bad for Japan. The word count must be 180-220. APU is my university name. If it has mistake,please editing. I believe globalization is good for Japan for several reasons. Firstly, globalization helps several Japanese situations. Actually, when the Great East Japan Earthquake in 2011, many Japanese people were helped by some foreign countries. According to Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan, 163 countries’ rescues team came to Japan to help. Moreover, the next day of the earthquake, Korean rescues team came to Japan. Secondly, it is possible to work in some foreign countries wherever you want. Actually, about fifty-six hundred thousand foreigners come to Japan for work and they give great technical offer to Japan. For example, USA taught Japan medical technology about treatment for cancer. Finally, it is possible to see the world. For instance, it is the fact that APU gets some benefits from globalization. It is wonderful that their field of view is spread by to know the various cultures. On the other hand, some people say that original culture is lost by globalization. However, actually we could get much more profits, especially after the World War Ⅱ, globalization has been promoted the Japanese technical develop. For these reasons, globalization is so profitable for Japan.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello! My native language is Japanese, and I am leaning English, because I want to talk other country people, and I am studying about what is poor and peace. Please talk to me.
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