Amanda Cardozo
Please coorect me My day Today I woke up at 11 am and I wasn't feeling well, I got a kind of flu or something like that and I really hope it's not covid. After waking up I had breakfast, my breakfast was two pieces of cake and a cup of coffee, I made chocolate cake yesterday so it was relly taste. After that I cleaning up my house starting from the bedroom, the living room and the kitchen. From lunch I made some omelette, beans and rice, fried bananas and lettuce salad. I usually have lunch at 12 am to 1 pm but today I made it later although i didn't want. In the afternoon I just chill and study some english because I'm trying to get my english better until the end of this year so I'm working hard on it. All the days I study using differents resources like apps, podcasts,movies, free courses and talk with my friends. Anyway I'm trying to return use this website wich I used for many times long years ago and I kind missing it.I made good friends on here. thanks for correct me bye
16 มิ.ย. 2021 เวลา 21:25
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Please correct me My day Today I woke up at 11 am and I wasn't feeling well. I have a kind of flu or something like that and I really hope it's not covid. After waking up I had breakfast. My breakfast was two pieces of cake and a cup of coffee. I made chocolate cake yesterday so it was really tasty. After that I cleaned up my house starting from the bedroom, the living room and the kitchen. For lunch I made an omelette, beans and rice, fried bananas and a lettuce salad. I usually have lunch from noon to 1 pm but today I made it later, although i didn't want to. In the afternoon I just chilled and studied english. I'm trying to improve my english by the end of the year so I'm working hard on it. Every day I study using different resources like apps, podcasts,movies, free courses and I talk with my friends. Anyway, I'm trying to use this website again which I used many times several years ago and I kind of miss it. I’ve made good friends on here. thanks for correcting me bye
16 มิถุนายน 2021
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Please correct me. My Day Today I woke up at 11 am and I wasn't feeling well. I may have a flu or something like that. I really hope it's not COVID. After waking up I had breakfast. My breakfast was two pieces of cake and a cup of coffee. I made chocolate cake yesterday and it was really tasty. After breakfast I cleaned up my house starting with the bedroom, then the living room and finally the kitchen. I made an omelette for lunch with beans, rice, fried bananas and a lettuce salad. I usually have lunch between 12 pm and 1 pm but today I made it later, although I didn't want to. In the afternoon I just relaxed and studied some English. I'm trying to get my English better by the end of this year so I'm working hard on it. Each day I study using different resources like apps, podcasts, movies, free courses and talking with my friends. Anyway I'm trying to use this website which I used many years ago because I miss it. I've made good friends on here. Thanks for correcting me. Bye
16 มิถุนายน 2021
1
Please correct me My day Today I woke up at 11 am and I wasn't feeling well. I thought I had a kind of flu or something like that and I really hoped it's wasn't covid. After waking up I had breakfast. My breakfast was two pieces of cake and a cup of coffee. I made chocolate cake yesterday so it was really tasty. After that I cleaned up my house starting in the bedroom, then going to the living room and finally the kitchen. For lunch I made an omelette, beans and rice, fried bananas and lettuce salad. I usually have lunch at 12 am to 1 pm but today I made it later. In the afternoon I just chilled and studied English because I'm trying to improve my English by the end of this year so I'm working hard on it. Everyday I study using different resources like apps, podcasts ,movies, free courses and talk with my friends. Anyway, I'm returning and using this website which I used for many times a few years ago and I kind of missed it. I made good friends here. Thanks for correcting me (or Thanks for your corrections) bye
I just put most of your verbs in the simple past tense. Nice job. I think I would like some of that tasty cake!
16 มิถุนายน 2021
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