My name is Misaki. I’m 20 years old, and starting this April, I will be in my third year of university. I study international relations. I left my hometown to pursue my studies. The last two years have been really exciting because I’ve tried many new things, such as sailing, part-time jobs, and living on my own. At some point, I gained weight. Luckily, I have lost six pounds since then.

My name is Misaki. I’m 20 years old. It will be my third year in university from this April. I study international relations. I left my hometown to study. The last 2 years were really exciting because I tried a lot of new things, such as sailing, part time jobs, and living by myself. At some point, I got fat. Luckily, I have lost 6 pounds since then. HI MW. Not a bad effort, well done. I hope my corrections can help you Two years WERE (it’s plural)

My name is Misaki. I’m 20 years old. I will be a third year in university starting this April. I study international relations. I left my hometown for study (university). The last 2 years were really exciting because I tried a lot of new things, such as sailing, part time jobs, and living by myself. At some point, I got fat. Luckily, I have lost 6 pounds since then.