My name is Wang Jie.I come from China，I am a senior high school student，Because of The college test is coming，I am very nervous and want to know how to learn my english.In my spare time，I often play guitar and listen to music.Actually，Music can relax the mood.My favorite songer is Jay of chinese music which He was famous of the Blue And White China.In fact，China have a number of delicious foods.For example，The barbecue of Zi Bo.As we know ，ShanDong province is enthusiastic and welcome all over the world people，To feeling traditional chinese culture. OK， that is a simple artic of mine Hi Wang Jie! Good job on your writing! Here are some corrections and explanations , Because - we can't begin a sentence in English with because. So.. you can say instead "I am very nervous because my college test is coming". Actually, - it's not natural to put actually at the beginning of a sentence. A better synonym would be in fact music relaxed me/improves my mood. China have - 3rd person singular so China has ( you probably know, it's a very common mistake!) The shandong province - you need to say clearly that it's the people who are enthusiastic and they welcome people all over the world. As you've written it sounds like the land is enthusiastic and welcomes people so it sounds a little strange:) To feeling Chinese culture - the meaning isn't very clear here ..but I think you mean that in the shandong province you can feel/get a sense of traditional Chinese culture. Simple artic - artic is a very cold place in the world. So I think you mean article. E.g. this is my simply written article. You may think it's simple but it's also interesting writing about your culture, food, people and traditions. Keep up the good work!

My name is Wang Jie. I come from China and I am a senior high school student. Since our test for general universities and colleges admission (Gakao if I remember) is coming I am very nervous and want to know how to improve my English. During my spare time I often play guitar and listen to music. Music can actually help me relax. My favorite singer is Jay, a Chinese singer who is famous int the country for his title: “Blue and White China”. China has a number of delicious foods, for example, Zi Bo barbecue. ShanDong province is known for its enthusiastic and welcoming people willing to introduce the traditional Chinese culture to people from all over the world. Ok, I’ve written a simple article.