Question: Do you prefer living alone or with somebody else? Please answer in English. I like living alone. There are two reasons. The one is when I study English no one disturbs me. The second is tha

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Question: Do you prefer living alone or with somebody else? Please answer in English. I like living alone. There are two reasons. The one is when I study English no one disturbs me. The second is that I can do anything that I want to do anytime. That is the reason I prefer to live alone.

19 ก.ค. 2024 เวลา 0:41

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Question: Do you prefer living alone or with somebody else? Please answer in English. I like (prefer) living alone. There are two reasons why. The one is when I study English no one disturbs me. The other is that I can do anything that I want to do anytime. Those are the reasons I prefer to live alone.

19 กรกฎาคม 2024

Good job using some transitional language to give your answer a nice clear structure! Some points for improvement: - to make your sentence more complex and flow better, you can combine the first two sentences. E.g I like living alone for two particular reasons: - “The one” should be changed to ‘the first reason’ - Add ‘that’ (the first reason is THAT …) - Finally, instead of “that is the reason I prefer to live alone”, it should be “these are the reasons…” because you’ve listed more than one. Hope this helps! :)

19 กรกฎาคม 2024

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