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ayane
Today, l wanted to eat instant noodles, so I ate it for the first time in a while.I know that snacks and instant noodles aren’t good for your health if you eat too much, but I really love them because they taste so good.I’ll make sure to eat vegetables too.
12 พ.ค. 2025 เวลา 8:27
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Today, I wanted to eat instant noodles, so I had them for the first time in a while. I know that snacks and instant noodles aren’t good for your health if you eat too much, but I really love them because they taste so good. I’ll make sure to eat vegetables as well.
Alternative Version:
Today, I felt like eating instant noodles, so I had them for the first time in a while. I know that snacks and instant noodles aren’t the healthiest if you eat too much, but I just love how they taste. I’ll make sure to include more vegetables in my diet.
Short Tip: When talking about food, use “had” instead of “ate” when referring to a meal or specific food you’ve consumed. Also, “as well” sounds more natural than “too” when you want to add something extra. Advice on Natural Flow of English: To improve the natural flow of your writing, try to vary your vocabulary a bit (e.g., "felt like" instead of "wanted to") and use linking words like "so" and "but" to connect ideas more smoothly.
12 พ.ค. 2025 เวลา 13:03
Today, l wanted to eat instant noodles, so I ate it/some for the first time in a while. I know that snacks and instant noodles aren’t good for your health/aren't healthy if you eat too much, but I really love them because they taste so good. I’ll make sure to eat vegetables too.
12 พ.ค. 2025 เวลา 9:06
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