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Katty
Hi everyone, I have to write a letter of application for my writing task. I would like you to tell me if I made any mistakes
Dear Sir Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of activity instructor which were advertised in the website of the company.
I am 22 years old and come from Peru. At present, I am completing my last year at university. I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons I am applying for the job is to improve my confidence in spoken English.
I do not have much experience in this kind of job but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself as an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports in the weekend, such as swimming or tennis. I consider that I am suitable for the job because I have good communication skills and I feel enthusiastic to meet new people.
I would be grateful if you could send me further details of the job. After the end of the university, I will be available for interview at any time. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Katherine
22 เม.ย. 2021 เวลา 7:21
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Having read the opportunities from your company website, I am interested in applying for the position of activity instructor.
I am 22 years old from Peru. At present, I am about to complete my last year of my degree from university of ........... I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons for applying this job is to improve my confidence in spoken English.
I do not have much experience in this kind of job but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself as an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports on the weekends and some of them are swimming and tennis. I believe that I am suitable for the job because of my communication skills and enthusiasm to meet new people. .
I would be grateful if you could consider my application for this opening. I will be available for interview any time. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Katherine
22 เมษายน 2021
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It's easier to correct this in the Exercise section.
It's mostly very good.
22 เมษายน 2021
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of activity instructor which was advertised on your company website.
I am 22 years old and come from Peru. At present, I am completing my final year at university. I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons I am applying for the job is to consolidate my skills in spoken English (if you talk about needing to improve your confidence that might seem negative...) .
I do not have much experience in this kind of job but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself as an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports at the weekend, such as swimming or tennis. I consider that I am suitable for the job because I have good communication skills and I feel enthusiastic to meet new people.
I would be grateful if you could send me further details of the job. When I have completed my university course, I will be available for interview at any time. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Katherine
22 เมษายน 2021
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