Hello everyone, I am preparing BEC (Cambridge Business English Certificate) examination. I am now practicing writing. I hope someone can help to correct my writing. The writing is as attached picture: This report aims to show the performance in profits of three factories, Bristol, Leeds, London, in last year, 2003, and to describe the scale of each of them. Bristol, the largest factory which hired 610 employees and had made a dramatic profit of 12 million pounds in first quarter. But it went down steadily and reached a low at 9 million pounds in last quarter. Leeds, the second largest factory who had a workforce of 350 stuff. It’s profits didn’t vary much and remained at most of the time at 8 million pounds. However it went slightly down to 7,6 million in third quarter. London factory is the smallest one, only employed 150 stuff. It has a very stable profits as well which stood at 3.5 million pounds but peaked at 4 million pounds at the second quarter.