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It’s a sunny day today. Christmas is just around the corner and the vibe is heating up—everything feels so Christmassy. I ordered a pack of cozy wool socks online, which are still en route. I am not sure if they will make it here before December 25th. My old socks with Christmas patterns were gradually snatched away by my dad, who ended up stretching them all out. Unforgettable, it was nowhere close to "borrow", that he said in the first place. This year, though, his present will be multiple pairs of woolly socks since he adores them so much!
20 ธ.ค. 2024 เวลา 11:11
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It’s a sunny day today. Christmas is just around the corner and the vibe is
heating up—everything feels so Christmassy. I ordered a pack of cozy wool socks
online, which are still en route. I am not sure if they will make it here before
December 25th. My old socks with Christmas patterns were gradually snatched away
by my dad, who ended up stretching them all out. Unforgettable, it was nowhere
close to "borrow", that he said in the first place. This year, though, his
present will be multiple pairs of woolly socks since he adores them so much!
I’m not sure you can “borrow” socks, who would want them back! Hope yours arrive!
21 ธันวาคม 2024
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Super easy to understand, I just changed a few phrases to make it sound more natural to me.
It’s a sunny day today. Christmas is just around the corner and the vibe is heating up—everything feels so Christmassy. I ordered a pack of cozy wool socks online, which are still on the way (en route isn't wrong here, it sounds a bit formal and feels out of place). I am not sure if they will make it here before December 25th.
My old socks with Christmas patterns were gradually snatched away by my dad, who ended up stretching them all out. Unforgettable, it was nowhere close to "borrow", that he said in the first place. These sentences is clear and easy to understand, but sounds awkward to me. I would say something like: All of my old socks with Christmas patters gradually disappeared as they got "borrowed" and stretched out by my dad. That's not what borrowing means to me.
This year, though, his present will be multiple pairs of woolly socks since he adores them so much!
Since he adores wooly Christmas socks so much he's going to get a pile of them this year!
20 ธันวาคม 2024
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