My country Oman is not as diverse as London because almost most people are Omani .They speak Arabic and have the same culture,however nowadays it’s becoming more diverse as many people from different countries have moved to it .
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My country Oman is not as diverse as London because most people are Omani. They speak Arabic and have the same culture; however, nowadays, it’s becoming more diverse as many people from different countries have moved here.
Hey! Well done! I think there are not a lot of problems. It is a question of a writing style. You can pay more attention to punctuation; that might help :).
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My country Oman is not as diverse as London because almost most people are Omani .They speak Arabic and have the same culture. However, nowadays it’s becoming more diverse as many people from different countries have moved here.
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